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for My Funny Little Valentine

by xxdedxx

person sadistickiss
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL you are HILARIOUS!!! I loved the attitude Sasuke when giving the gifts and absolutely adored Naruto's stupidity ^^ Keep it up!! PS. I hope you got better =] Thanks for writing even though you were sick!
person Ameela
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, too funny. i read this at 6:30 am and i had the hardest time not trying to laugh(people sleep at this hour here) and i even got tears, trying to stay calm.
person Kayo
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMFAO!!!! I laughed so hard when i read this i almost fell out of my chair!!! I love so many of your stories, and this one is one i would expect from you....I LOVE IT!!! XDDDDD I can't wait for an update and to see what happens next!!! Keep on writing bcuz you are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kayo
person chelzi
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was GREAT!! neji was such a liar, and naruto was so innocent! and, and, and..."YOU'VE CORRUPTED HIM!!" it was wonderful!! this was awesome!!!~
person SW
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O
I demand a sequel. >=D
person wendyghost
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this ! i laughed so much!
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....*DEAD* YOU KEELED ME!
person Inus_Kagome_Forever
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! That was some funny ass shit! Update! Please, and when you do, please, please give me an e-mail telling me you updated.
Please!

Inus_kagome_Forever
person Hellagoddess
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*still laughing*

Awesome... So funny.. loved the little poem and Sasuke's subsequent nosebleed...

Well done!

Hellagoddess
person kyuubigirl
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG. It took me an extra twenty minutes to read this because I couldn't get to the end without laughing at every damn line of that card. And the sad thing is that Naruto would be that stupid. That was a friggin' riot. And the line where Sasuke says, "Where in the hell was he going to keep that?! Right next to his Hello Kitty alarm clock and Little Orphan Annie lunch box?!" Guh, and the stuff with Neji was priceless. Man, I've still got the giggles.