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for My Funny Little Valentine

by xxdedxx

person anonymous
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHA!!! It cracks me up! It should have a sequel or something like that. Poor Neji... ... i think that he'd suffered a severe trauma.
person shishio
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks* Oh, poor, poor Naruto. You should really write a second chapter, just so that we could see Naruto learn the /real/ meaning of the words. Also, you are /not/ a bad writer, you rock! I thought this was hilarious, especially with Neji telling Naruto what those words /mean/ and then when all of Naruto's team and Iruka read that letter, it was priceless!
person valanthe
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Buahahahahahahaaa I can't stop laughing :D:D:D:D:D
poor Neji...
this story is soo funny :D
I hope you'll get well soon ;)
person Briryan
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooo funny!!! I laughed through the whole thing. Are you going to write a second chapter to this? I would love the read Naruto's reaction to what Sasuke has planned for him.
person dakara
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this almost gave me a laugh attack, at 1.20am, seriously
person Sarah
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was freakin hilarious!!!!! You need to write a sequal to this!!! Great Job!!!
person zOmBiExGiRl
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO That was AWESOME!!! i can't stop laughing!!! you ROX
person syrus
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG that has got to be the cutest and funniest thing i have ever read in my life and poor neji i can just imagine the look on his face when naruto asked him what a blow job was and kakashi must have been rolling on the ground from laughing so hard please do continue
person an imperfect illusion
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I about died laughing when I read the card! It was soo hilarious! I loved it!
person notamawriter
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaah omg omg omg omg omg!!!! i was so shocked i was laughing my fucking ass off!!!! Holy hell! Where did you get the idea! I was laughing my ass off in my room my dad had to come shut me up. I fell off my bed a few times! Naruto is so clue less. But you got me with a something rod...-sigh- im so dense. Anyway plase update. Will sasuke do what i think he's gonna do?! (grins) i think im gonna need a grinsectame (sp i heard it some where i know what it mans i just dont know how to spell it.) i jus cant stop thinkin about it!!!!