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for One Winter Morning

by Trollmia

person Anonymous
schedule June 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So adorable *-----*
person ptiteyuko
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that's a very good story!!
and well written!!!! ^ ^
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person Mulle
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me like! :)
It was a really sweet story, and I liked the concept.
person cereal killer
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww! That was all i could think as i read this. a prequel of how they lost each other would be nice. please,...with sprinkles on top!
person Vibora
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was...beautiful smut! lol that's what it was and it was awesome!
person RikiTiki
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Um... I liked the story... but I'm... I don't want to say confused b/c I understood it.... I just think it was kinda weird...GOOD but weird.... I mean what idiot has sex with a bum that he has known for like 2 hrs, when he doesn't know anything about the other than the fact that he has been living on the streets.. I mean really? Can We say STD's??? But if You read it and just don't constantly think, crabs...crabs...cra..wait, they had sex and naruto never had a shower...and he said earlier how dirty he was...ew he probably had poo all over his butt!, then it was excellent! So Great job! And I'm not being sarcastic or flaming! I mean it! Great Job!
person demona
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story. No matter how many times I read it.
person Kurai yo
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I loved this! It was so utterly cute...
person Gwyllion
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Trollmia! From my memory, you're from Y! *waves*

I came across this fic and absolutely fell in love with it. It made me teared up in a few places. Such a sweet and beautifully sad reunion between these two, knowing that they had prob died/separated in the past and only to be reunited again in the afterlife. I would SO LOVE to read a continuation on this fic, but no matter. This stands on it's own and deserves so much more applause! Thank god for fics to keep my mind busy over my business trip. And THANK YOU for sharing this lovely story. I enjoyed it so very much! :D
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! It was very adorable!!