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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just beautiful... I'm speechless. One of the best stories i have ever read in my life.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful! ^___^
Your writing style is...ok, so I'm not good a describing writing styles ,but I LIKE yours. A lot. :D
The reincarnation theme was so sweet. It doesn't even matter that I don't believe in reincarnation; the way you wrote it was beautiful.
It had angst, humor(Naruto in ladies underwear XDlol),near-murder (O.o I would SO not want to wake up to Sasuke holding a knife over me. eep!), fluff (those little soulmates are so sweet together) and, let's not forget; SMUT! (I'm such a perv...XD; tee, hee)
Wonderful story. I will definately go check out your other works. ^_^
~yuri-san <3
Your writing style is...ok, so I'm not good a describing writing styles ,but I LIKE yours. A lot. :D
The reincarnation theme was so sweet. It doesn't even matter that I don't believe in reincarnation; the way you wrote it was beautiful.
It had angst, humor(Naruto in ladies underwear XDlol),near-murder (O.o I would SO not want to wake up to Sasuke holding a knife over me. eep!), fluff (those little soulmates are so sweet together) and, let's not forget; SMUT! (I'm such a perv...XD; tee, hee)
Wonderful story. I will definately go check out your other works. ^_^
~yuri-san <3
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay. At the very end where you say: "did it really mattered in end?" I couldn't help but notice that the wording is off. You should say--I think you meant to say: "did it really matter in the end?".
I hope I helped you and didn't offend you or anything. Most of the time, authors like help with spelling and grammar mistakes, but I didn't see any Author's Notes about what you prefer. sooo... yeah, I'm just trying to help ^^
I hope I helped you and didn't offend you or anything. Most of the time, authors like help with spelling and grammar mistakes, but I didn't see any Author's Notes about what you prefer. sooo... yeah, I'm just trying to help ^^
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That's all I can say. This is a beautiful story. So romantic. One of the best Naruto stories I've EVER read. Great job. Hope to see more works from you soon.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Like I said before, I just love your fics. Keep it up!
Seisai
Seisai
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I truly do. You combined fate and love and friendship and my favorite Naruto pairing together into a well-written and beautiful story. Thank you so much for such a wonderful read.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so good!
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ That was cute! Good job! Thank you!
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE! I loved it! ^-^
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this will attempt to be a nice and heartwarming comment.
i really liked the presise and the abandoned mansion idea was really sweet. the reincarnation/soul mate bit was a convenient way to get them back together again! the wintery snow imagery in the beginning was quite lovely. good work on the story.
i really liked the presise and the abandoned mansion idea was really sweet. the reincarnation/soul mate bit was a convenient way to get them back together again! the wintery snow imagery in the beginning was quite lovely. good work on the story.