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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a really intense story. Are you going to update it? I know it's been over a year, so I don't know if you're planning on continuing it or not. I hope you do. If not, thanks for at least having a well-written first part to the story! ~ Jelp
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What a great story so far! I really hope you are planning to continue this! If you have a email list to notify when you update...Please include me!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay - another awesome story from you. Sasuke is such a bitch *sigh* but I love him anyway. I can't wait to find out more, like the reasons behind Sasuke's treatment of Naruto (was it Itachi or Orochimaru???). And will Naruto ever be able to forgive Sasuke. It's hard to get over abuse of any kind, especially when it comes from a partner, or someone you love (and we all know Naruto loves Sasuke).
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pokes*
Just wanted to let you know I'm still hoping for an update on this story.
XD
I hope you are well.
mydarkerside
Just wanted to let you know I'm still hoping for an update on this story.
XD
I hope you are well.
mydarkerside
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read both this fic and "Broken" and these are both great. Broken was TOTALLY AWESOME!!!! Some of the best writing - you had a good beta, too. Noticed your writing in this fic is also good but more spelling/grammar errors. Need a beta? Give me a holler. I am going to try to read some more of your fics. Please keep writing. Enjoy the Navy. I was Army. Believe me Navy is better but anything combining military intelligence is an oxymoron...which is why they always screw up assignments, etc. :)
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Today was a re-read day of my favorite author, yeah! I was just thinking, it would be very interesting to get a chapter from Sasuke's point of view. Though maybe that would give too much away too quickly. *sighs* Especially at chapter 3. All of a sudden, I really, really wanted to see that chapter rewritten in Sasuke's POV.
Well, I still love this newest story from you, the angst is cathartic, and I hope that you find to update soon.
Well, I still love this newest story from you, the angst is cathartic, and I hope that you find to update soon.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say it every time I review your fics, but i hope it doesn't get old;
I love it!!
Can't wait for the next part!! :3
I love it!!
Can't wait for the next part!! :3
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, I like stories where Sasuke is a basket case.
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapte, I can not wait too see what happens next. Please update soon
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love love love this story
i've never actually read a naruto fic with the a similar story line to this
and im really curious to see where you take this.
i read just another day in paradise, and i have to say, that fic broke my heart.
i was tempted to read your fic broken, but im thinking it might be a little too hardcore for me
but i do adore this one, and i hope its as long as the other two!!
i've never actually read a naruto fic with the a similar story line to this
and im really curious to see where you take this.
i read just another day in paradise, and i have to say, that fic broke my heart.
i was tempted to read your fic broken, but im thinking it might be a little too hardcore for me
but i do adore this one, and i hope its as long as the other two!!