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for Not every thing is as it seems.

by arora1

person STARR*
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This is such a wonderful fanfic. It is really well written and you have a really nice plot going. You pay nice attention to detail and are covering things thoroughly. I really hope you update soon. I can't wait. I'm sorry I'm giving you one of those "Great fanfic update soon" reviews, I'm usually able of giving a better review however, this fanfic is just so good I really don't know where to begin, it’s just that good.
person DarkendStAr
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude I came apon this story and its good! Keep it up! I can't wait for more! What is going to happen between naruto and sasuke are they going to work it out? Or does sakura need to knock some sense into sasuke! Blah I wanna know! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
person losthimagain
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ I love it! It's sad but it's nice! Is there more? I hope so!
person mmm
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have read your other stories and know that you do good work, i can't wait for the next chapter because i know that you'll make it interesting.
ahh the wonders of a plot. a good one.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo thrilled to see a new fic by you!! XD
Really great beginning! Can't wait to see more!

/Psylocke
person STARR*
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. A interesting fanfic. I really feel sorry for Naruto. I like how you wrote about his healing factor. That was an interesting and (as far as I know) original. I hope that this isn't just a one-shot and that you continue with this story. I really like it.
person Kat
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-grin- Go Naruto, beat the fuck outta Sasuke! ...whoo!
person Mehket
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your work it's so angsty, bastard sasuke is so cool, too bad it's not like the mange where he's.......well let's just say he's different. Keep up the good work.
person Mekhet
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your work it's so angsty, bastard sasuke is so cool, too bad it's not like the manga where he's.......well let's just say he's different. Keep up the good work.
They need to add something to stop double posts like spell check or a delete system, sorry.