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for I (heart) Iruka

by Loquora

schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha .. that was really cute. I hope Kakashi knows how mad Iruka gets! Cute story.. I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More please! Good work so far. :)
person ALD
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, I was wondering if it was going to be continued. The lemon was really good and I want to know what's going to happen between Kakashi and Iruka. Pls update soon!
person innerchild
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for the next chapter. this story is the first that i've read that actually revolves around iruka and kakashi as much as naruto and sasuke. tis good in my books. loved it and hope you update soon.

-inc
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that first chapter was just about the cutest thing i have ever read!!! and then the rest was just plan hot and hilarious. can't wait for your next update!
person Hasu
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to say........DAMN!! And that I love you ^__^ More please more, this is wonderful and hot, so hot I had to shed layers while reading this.
Seriously.
person Gossa
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! more!! xD very good stuff!
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Before I really review, here are some chapter 2 errors that I want to point out (I'll forget if I don't do it now).
Then he realized he was being asked to leave and was much more interested in actually starting the date then fighting. *”then” in the very last part of the sentence should be “than”*
and
“It is a pretty serious offence; usually if my students try something like that I have to punish them. The worst I can really do is tie them up and yell at them.” *“offence” should be “offense”*
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY!!!! This is my new favorite fic of the week. I really loved it! The plot...the smut...it was a great package and I cannot wait for more.

"The sexy sensei made good mental floss" was the best line ever. I chuckled when I read it and couldn't resist letting you know how highly I thought of it. I am sad that there are no other works by you that I can go read, but hopefully (I'm begging you, really) you will post another chapter of this relatively soon.
person Shosuro
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it too much!!!
***wipes drool from cheek****
That was hot!!!
Can't wait until next time you update!