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for Will you ever stop??

by Trollmia

person PuppetofShadows
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FREAKIN HOT!!!! I LOVED THIS STORY YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED AUTHOR AND ONE OF MY FAVS KEEP IT UP.ARE COULD YOU MAKE A SHIKA/ASUMA FIC SOMETIME
person animekid
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rare as hell pairing..and I love you for that

I was giggling at the little bits between asuma/kakashi that made me smile too happily; really well done, even with the lemon ^_^
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow O.O I've never seen this pairing before but I like it ^^ Thank you for doing something most people wouldn't do.
person severedwings
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was an interesting pairing, one that I haven't read yet! I was a little nervous of tring it out, but then I saw it were you that wrote it. And, having liked everything you do, I tried it. *grins*, thanks, it was wonderful.

Ja,
SeveredWings
person llyoung
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love Kakashi. Love Asuma. Love them together. Thanks for your story.
person random reviewer
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How exactly can Asuma taste Kakashi's lips if he didn't take off his mask?
person alphab
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! SUPER HOT! There are no words to describe how freakin HOT that story was! Great job! Please continue?
person krickets (NSI)
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
creamy Asuma/kakashi goodness

fun fun fun

i love it when kakashi is Uke
person blueanon
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsm!!!! i loved it, this worls needs more asuma/kakashi
it was really nice, two-thumbs up :)
person SilentInquisition
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting pairing! I make it a bit of a hobby to read the kind of out there pairings, and I'm always glad to see Kakashi paired with someone who isn't Iruka, Sasuke, or Naruto... Not that I don't enjoy those too. But a bit of a change is always good. *smiles* I'm feeling that this is a bit of a one-shot, but do make another story, yeah? Authors who don't bow to the whims of the masses of popular pairing fangirls are hard to find.