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for Crystal Bay

by iTsUkI

person Chromde
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, love to see more. Very suspenseful, and the suspense has barely started.
person RogueFanAM
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good to see this chapter updated! Hopefully the next update doesn't take as much time...

Anyway, I liked all the little interactions the charcters had. Sasuke's and Naruto's were especially funny. :)

Intailly, the title for this chapter confused me. Is this gonna be like Cabin fever, too? I know it already has elements from the movie 'wrong turn', but are you going incorporate other horror movies into this as well?

Until next chapter, bye!



person shinigamigrl
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter ^.^ I thought this story wasn't going to be continued, but i'm glad that you are still writing it regardless of the lack of reviews you have gotten. Update soon.
person Sanshu
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to write more of this~! I like horror fics and yours seems like it could be a good one. I am also going to go read 'Scream' that you put up in the fic, sounds like it would be good too. Good luck with your stories! Hope to see more, or else~! D< XD;;; Just joking.

- Sanshu
person heytwoyoutoo
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally I think you should use a character from the anime> Like Itachi (he doesn't have to be related to Sasuke), Orochimaru, or Kimmaru. But Anyway, I love the story so far and can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work. ^.^
person heytwoyoutoo
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh heh sorry I ment to spell Kimimaro not Kimmaru or whatever I spelled.
person Nekochan134
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I saw a movie like this...And I've only Read the first chapter....Same begining...Well almost, the guy that stopped a the gas station was on his way to a business meeting.....The culprits wouldn't happen to be mountain folk ((all male and brothers)) that were mutated and disfigured from in-breeding and have high tolerence for pain and end up killing all but two characters would they?....xD If I'm close at all email me. if not then I'll just go read the wrest of the story...
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting start... A problem though, you should spell check. ^_^
person Weaver
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Something involving Neji and Lee, huh? This, I gotta read. X3 Update soon!
person shinigamigrl
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am totally into this story. Please update soon.