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by CutieSakura

person Misted
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once you finish Forgetting Sasuke, I really think you should consider making this into a longer piece. I love you're work and can see this becoming another amazing story!
person Yuffie
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God. Sasuke is so hot. XD You should totally make it into a longer chaptered fic. <3 This was definitely one of my favorites!
person anonymous
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make it longer, make it longer! Your writing have always been amazing and it would just be too disappointing not to see more! Never are the subjects too out of their character and there's always that subtle but lovely touch of humour. Your style of writing is just enthralling. I definitely would love to read more even if it is not this particular piece. You rock!
person kara-chan.a
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! Please, please, please continue with this! You are an amzing author, I loce your works and know that this could turn into an amazing story. PLEASE continue!! I'm begging you!
person kara-chan.a with a P.S
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, I'd like to see him try and get over her now!!
person Megha
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. You HAVE to continue this........ Well, its fabulous on its own, absolutely, but I would love to see where this scenario with this set of events and circumstances, will go for SasuSaku. Keep writing! [Lee: YOSH!]
person Jackie
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue story...
person Serina
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing. I like your writing style and ability to keep in character. I'd love to see this made longer!
person azuuei
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting strategy. *takes notes*


i say longer. uh huh. longer. details. oh yummy. *grins like an idiot*
this is a good one. :3
person Tsukashi
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lily! I haven't talked to you in awhile, huggles!

This story is just awesome! LOVE it! I want to see a continuation! I want to see Saucy fall HARD while Sakura dangles him along. The witty, clever way she manipulates him and the way he falls right into it was a stroke of genius! Very well written!

Tsukashi