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by CutieSakura

person NinjaTech
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is waaaaaay wicked! Plz update soon! I'll be waiting for more exciting moments between them! I want to see how Sasuke will react in the morning. This could come to a very good fic if you give it a try! So I full recommend you to continue. I hope you continue... so plz when you update plz plz plz email me!
person Deanna
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Go Sakura! As she has FINALLY figured out, the quickest way to get Sasuke's attention is to piss him off by a) ignoring him or b) saying a little word he never hears. "No". I'd actually like to see a couple more chapters, because they'd be hysterically funny. Because Sasuke will pretend nothing happened the next morning. Disappointed but resigned, Sakura will "move on" and start flirting with other guys and Sasuke will freak out, go all macho-she's-my-woman on her and go into a posessive rage, leading the plot right back around to smut. Yum. And it would be hysterically funny to watch. Naruto would laugh his ass off. So would I. Hehehehe...
person trisha
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I hopeyou go on with it
person LoveKitten
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stupid
person Himoto
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that the pairing between Sakura and Sasuke has always been one of my favorites and your story was wonderful. I'm going to be selfish and say yes! You -should- write more for this pairing!
person Nadi
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that you should continue this story. :)
person Brans
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I VOTE LONGER PIECE! *waves hand wildly in the air*

Excellent. Just as good, if not better than the first chapter. You play their dynamic wonderfully. *applaud*
person krickets
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I WANT I WANT!!!

please do AT LEAST another chapter Pleeeeeeeeeease!!

lol i love that you did the same scene in each of their POV it was fun
person LISA
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE THIS STORY I LIKE TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THEY GET HOME AND NARUTO'S REACTION TO THE WHOLE SASUKE SAKURA RELATIONSHIP THING
person Shyneamor
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do indeed like this story. Please I will like to see more. It is about time that perk got played don't you think. I will be looking for your update.