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by CutieSakura

person Luvspanky
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I like how you portray Sakura. I'm glad you didn't turn her into some simpering love sick ninny! It would be nice if you did turn it into something longer.
person Nicole
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE TURN IT INTO SOMETHING LONGER! THE ONESHOT IS TOO PERFECT. IT HAS TO BE MADE INTO A LONG STORY. WHAT IT'S LIKE NOW THAT THEY HAVE SLEPT TOGETHER? HOW DO THEY ACT AROUND EACH OTHER? YOU HAVE TO MAKE IT LONG AND GREAT. PLEASE UPDATE. thanks.
person meliny
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how it happened in the eyes of sakura is soooooo cute. . . i thought it was funny at the end if u do make it longer then i look forward to reading more of it
person Lady Darkness
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far.
I would like to see this one continued.
Whatever you decide, great work.
person M n M's
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol! Sakura's chapter is even better than the first! So she was in control the whole time... poor Sasuke, he doesn't stand a chance. This would make an awsome chapter story if you don't drag it out- which i doubt you will, being the good author that you are. Update Soon if you decide to continue!
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute. I find it amusing how clueless Sasuke can be, and Sakura's side of it is just as fun. It'll be super interesting to see how this goes, if you plan to continue it. ^^
person Kay
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was perfect! Lol, possessive Sasuke is the best! I absolutely love this Fic, Great Work! Please continue!!!
person Josh
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update hope to see more chapters up soon and keep up the good work and take care
person dbarron
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't wait for the second part and it was just as much fun as the first part. I tried reviewing before but the comp was screwing up. I just really love Sakura in this fic.

Wracked with uncertainty she still manages to appear strong and confidant in front of Sasuke.

I for one would love it if it continued. I'd really enjoy to see her turning the tables on the Uchiha for a change! ^-^
person Brans
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honey, you are a Goddess. *praise* Eagerly awaiting part two.

AND GO SAKURA! SHANNARO! *coughs* Erm, sorry.