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for The Nara Oath

by wonderfullyredundant

person Paige C.
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh goodnes ;o; This is getting too good! Oooo, who will she end up with? Prolly both somehow :p
person Shika's girl
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon i love this fanfic

pleaseeeeeeeeeee lol update soon
person Nakashima_Michiyo
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I suddenly know how a crack fiend feels.
Please update soon. Thank you.
person Hestia
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow--this is really cool how you are making this so romantic and involving serious love in all directions!
person lanier
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, wow!! I was panicked for a moment until I saw the TBC on the bottom. I thought you were going to end it there. I was ready to cry. GReat chapter. I cant wait for the next last? chapter.
person sarah
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!! I can hardly wait for your update! Your portray of Shikamaru and Kiba is just too great,they're both sexy as heck!! Nice job!! I will be waiting patiently for the new chapter, please don't take too long!
person Barbie
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dooooooood! I started reading this last chapter. And MAAAAAN! It's awesooooome! I love it! :3 I don't like the cliffhangers though! To death with cliffhangers!! >.<

Continuuuuuuue! Please!! As SOOOOOON as possible!! I can't hold on much longer!! Shikamaru is GREEAAAAT!! XDD
person cathy
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 is indeed something to be jealous of--wow! (A++) I'm looking forward to the grand conclusion in Chapter 8 as I am sure many other readers are. I salute you for your courage--it's scary to just be writing a review, but I'm seriously motivated to encourage you to please keep writing!
Thanks!
person Kyuubi Fanatic
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While the thought of InoXKiba, InoXShika, KibaXShika, and InoXShikaXKiba greatly disturbs me, this is too good to not read. (Although they are far outta character in my opinion)
person VK
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for the 7th chapter and here it is.

You made me do the whole "Gotta hold back the tears." Thingy. ._. But I couldn't. And I cried like a little bitch. XD