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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whaa...That was perverted and wrong but I liked it and wish for more.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,thank you for responding so graciously.Oh yeah,I really liked it!It has alot of promice and works as a one off too.I like that Sasuke was responsive.Its not as harsh then.....I am sorry that Itachi didn't pop his cherry before he was sold/given,it would have been a kindness,a few days later he would have been in no pain and looser not to mention his first time would be with someone he loves....maybe later eh?I am sorry I was unclear about my fondness for this,it was edgy and hooooot!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, one of the best Naruto fictions I have ever read. I was surprised how, although it was non-con, you made Sasuke enjoy it in a way that wasn't at all cheesy. It was almost as if he knew it was a responsibility of his.
The ending was very well done, and you should most definitely continue the story. I recommend something along the lines of a couple years later with the war just ending and Itachi coming to rescue his brother, but keeping up with that wonderful smut you put in.
The ending was very well done, and you should most definitely continue the story. I recommend something along the lines of a couple years later with the war just ending and Itachi coming to rescue his brother, but keeping up with that wonderful smut you put in.
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh this is Great!! i love sick and twisted. what if naruto was in orochimaru's bed chambers waiting for him when sasuke is brought there?
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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FUCKING HOT.
I have to say, I absolutely LOVE the idea behind this fic.
Especially the fact that so many people were watching them.
Just...wow.
I really hope you continue with this story.
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FUCKING HOT.
I have to say, I absolutely LOVE the idea behind this fic.
Especially the fact that so many people were watching them.
Just...wow.
I really hope you continue with this story.
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! that was awsome! you should defenlently write more!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! please update it has so much potential to be such a graet fic!
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story was amazing!!! Please keep writting, it'sa really great story. ^_^
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freaky,at least Sasuke wasn't in pain and fear..for ever....stretching is impossible to do without blood on the unwilling..especially roughly,try it on yourself.Non the less,freaky hot.Hope Oro falls to Sasukes charms uttrerly and leaves him Sound.Hostages where commen in anceint Rome,(Vlad the Impalor was a hostage of the moslims for years in later wars other famous men too )and homosexuality was nothing back then too but for a man to publicly make a concubine of a legitimate son....you amaze me.This is fiction however.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please let there be more!! This has gotten very good! EM