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for A Devil In the Moonlight

by EternalTwylight

person yarande
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was hot, dark and almost perfect.

"Who's your Daddy?" wrecked the atmosphere for me though. It went from fucking hot to ridiculous because of that for me.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! That was simply AMAZING- wow.
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your word choice in all of this. It's perfect. Beautiful language. :)
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was deep!! Kudos!!!
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Kakashi and Sakura are my favorit pairing. I will have to check out your other writings. Very good. You are very talented.
Thank you
Tricia
person Jesie
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so well written and romantic.I still feel so emotoinal about it well done


* sniffles* so cute!
person Clemen
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful fic. The details and plot are amazing. I really enjoy reading your fic. Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
person koham
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good!...the plot was interesting....hmm...are u gonna continue it??....if so....then..update soon!
anyway..keep up the great work!!
person darksoul
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!!....u've got some great talent there!!....the plot's amazing!....plz continue it!!
person mel
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes, you must continue this story! More, more, more - please??