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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was alright, but I was really expecting Dan not Naruto. Besides, you really took him OOC. He is usually very sensative about his manhood. So yeah, but it was pretty nice those big tities and...(goes into a dream). Oh sorry I need to see Temari right now.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm that was pretty sweet but the dance to a pond went type fast no? Still respect for the anatomy is always a good thing.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...the Kankuroxtenten scene was amazing. Those two make an awesome couple.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEW Kankuro and TenTen. You should have made it Neji and TenTen. Thats cuter. Sorry for this late review and i know you can't change it. So...yeah.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kankuro and Ten??????????????? Yeah right. this crap gets a 0
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm... This really doesn't belong in the yuri section, as like... 95% of this is het. It's not a bad story, just incorrectly classified.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, loved it xD
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is clasified as yuri... so where is the yuri. so far is just girls talking about straight stuff that is hentai.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
y'know, i'm not so enthusiastic about your other naruto fic *cough*no yaoi warning*cough*, but this one takes the cake. I have to say though OOC especially on Tsunade. even though she is very "well endowed" she would never be that openly sexual. especially with naruto. also Kakashi would never do sakura even in that situation. OOC but well written. the multiple naruto thing was kinda gimmicky, but i don't think i've ever seen a writer do that. also don't you think it would take massive amounts of chakra and concentration to create shadow clones with functional reproductive organs? anyway great writing.