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for Girls Night In

by NekoGirlLara

person kristin
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this fanific. It's original. ...you know i just now figured out who genma is. i always thought he was naruto's little frog summon and then i googled him and I'm like...whoa. so question-whats naruto's frog's name?
person Shamie-chan
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My favs, Ino/Asuma and the Saukra/Tsunade/Kakashi one. Other than that, still pretty good. I think you should write what you want when you want and not take requests. You write better that way. You'll always get people begging for Temari-Gaara-cest, even if you find it disgusting (personally, the fact that Temari even heard the story about Kankuro and Tenten grossed me out). Otherwise, I liked it. Usually I'm only into yuri, so you did pretty good lol.
person Stoner Fox
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Briliantly seductive, while still being well written and thought out. I loved the more unusual pairings and ideas you put into the story, very creative.
person Tetsudai
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Best...story...ever! If you write a story about Iruka, is it going to be a yaoi?
person review lord
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lucky fox bastard (naruto)
person Alexander
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. Havent seen to many this good.
person randomperson with no life...
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hott!! i loved the one with Kiba and Hinata, plus the one with Tenten and Kankuro...oh god their really hott!! i love it...sweet...this is the koolest story ever....very awesome and great...check ya later
person blacksailsof1989
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! that was fucking amazing. i mean... damn. im speechless. excellent fic. if ure still takeing requests, i have one. anything with anko that doesnt involve kakashi or orochimaru. there arent that many anko fics but those pairings are getting old.
person ... yeah...
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked this story until the last chapter... i personally think naruto sucks ass and would fart all through sex. i'll read the other chapters frequently, but i cut the last one off
person Jovianwolfgirl
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man that was great! I really like it. I hope to see your new story out soon!