rate_review Reviews

This is such an excellent story, you really got into Itachi's head, this is one of the very select few stories based on Itachi between fanfic, and AFF that is actually amazing. I love you writing style, althoug sometimes you can slightly tell it's not your first language I have to say your writing is more eloquent than most english authors out there. Hopefully one day you will update again because I have just been raving about your story to all of my friends and even they are interested to know what is going to happen next!

I love this story! I hope to see an update soon!!!

I like Kakashi & Itachi part. I wonder if Itachi will try it on his Sasuke.

I Love the KakashixItachi pairing your story had me going from the first chapter even when it was just an OC, now I crave for another chapter, I hope you do plan to continue this and haven't fallen off the face of the planet.

More than cool m'dear.Itachi is droll,for a thirteen year old.Kakashi is up for Times,that's f'sure.Update pleeeease.

Holy hell! That was hot and interesting! I found it very informing about itachi! I hope you update soon! I will be waiting!

ur doing so well for a story with a plot like yours! update soon!!

but please :
no kakaita
oroita is acceptable i guess
shisui/ita i don't see thatoften so ya
ita/sasu,ita/naru, akatsuki leader/itachi i'd die for!!
no kisaita!!! that's just cruel to itachi!

i'd be happy to see unusual pairings like hidan/itachi too!

of coarse, like many people say, u don't have to smut in every chapter. but i've always been anticipating some shisuixitachi action. please do it soon!

Sex is unplotable?I think you did a damn good job.It didn't interupt the flow......it was rather interesting.His father is a drip,as always.

this is great you are one of the first to use the lack of characteristics to make a beleivable character.i really love what you have done with Itachi.Incest,well since sasuke seems pretty jealous and Itachi can't go catting around yeah,have sasuke start it.* or ( is hardly an infant,thats when pubery starts in boys so gopher,bt that I mean they can come .Besides,lets face it these ninja kids are way advanced and are hardly treated like children,as unable or febble minded or phycically undeveloped.I have a sasuke fisting Itachi fic and not for revenge either...you can use chakra use,not many do,sexually funny cause most ninja would feel crippled with no chakra.Shi....his reactions,his refusal of his cousin is really cruel and I'm confused why he punched him...sour grapes?How destructive.

I really like this story. Thoughtful, and making us see a side of Itachi that we haven't really seen before. I like the way you portray his thoughts and make it questionable to whom he will kill.
Kaka-Ita sounds wicked *sniggers* But please, even though I like Uchihacest in general, I'm not too fond of when Sasuke is 7-8 years old... that just squicks me.

Please update soon!