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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh! yesyesyes for uchihacest!!!! either shita and/or itasasu, please! incest is best!!!!!!! -grins pervertedly at thought of characters from naruto having hardcore sex- -nosebleed- hee hee hee...oh, and as for kakaita, yesyes to that too!! uke!itachi rocks!!!!!!! -giggle- -drool- so does slutty!itachi......gtg before i pass out from bloodloss and pervertedness... -waves bye bye cheerfully- I'M NOT HIGH!!!!!!!!!
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't like KakaIta at all, so i'd request for Itasasu instead, and ShiIta over that!!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely loving this fic. And boy is Itachi a mess. I think it would be better not to go for uchihacest when Sasuke is only around 8 years old. But of course it's your call ^_^ KakaIta yum and earlier I was actually really expecting to get some ShisuiIta but I think it's great this way. Please update soon!
At least in the 2nd chapter you used except when it should have been expect or accept.
At least in the 2nd chapter you used except when it should have been expect or accept.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KakaxIta? YAY!!! i havent read many stories wit that pairing so it should be interesting as for Uchihacest it doesnt matter to me if u wish to exclude it. great chapter by the way. pls update soon!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to NOT have uchihacest... *coughs* this is the only incest i can't seem to like (even though lately... er... let's leave it at that).
but apart for this, wonderful chapter! ^^ I really like how you're going on with the plot. the uchiha family is really rotten inside, in many ways, but at the moment of your fic it stil isn't that clear. shisui is still fighting but i do wonder why can't he just... renounce and fuck the shit out of itachi? *snickers* obviously we don't ask you smut every chapter, that would ruin the fic. don't worry. to be here on AFF.net you don't need to write lemon in every chapter. *pats*
as for now, itachi whoring himself off for fun is making me snicker. loudly. i mean. that is a way of looking at him I never thought I would appreciate. i often think the exact opposite (he would never dwelve in such trivial and useless things) but in the prospective you give, it's just perfect.
can't esplain how amazing i think this fic is. you should deserve more reviews.
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until next time,
Ceph
but apart for this, wonderful chapter! ^^ I really like how you're going on with the plot. the uchiha family is really rotten inside, in many ways, but at the moment of your fic it stil isn't that clear. shisui is still fighting but i do wonder why can't he just... renounce and fuck the shit out of itachi? *snickers* obviously we don't ask you smut every chapter, that would ruin the fic. don't worry. to be here on AFF.net you don't need to write lemon in every chapter. *pats*
as for now, itachi whoring himself off for fun is making me snicker. loudly. i mean. that is a way of looking at him I never thought I would appreciate. i often think the exact opposite (he would never dwelve in such trivial and useless things) but in the prospective you give, it's just perfect.
can't esplain how amazing i think this fic is. you should deserve more reviews.
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until next time,
Ceph
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you should just leave the chibi affection between them, or maybe some mild shounen-ai would be nice.
Wonderful story so far, even as a secondary language, your English is better than people I know of. Loving the characterizations, keep up the great work!
Wonderful story so far, even as a secondary language, your English is better than people I know of. Loving the characterizations, keep up the great work!
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea of uchihacest for this fic
normally i dont go for it but im in the mood so yea...what the heck
and throw in kakashi TOO!!
normally i dont go for it but im in the mood so yea...what the heck
and throw in kakashi TOO!!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gaahhh!!! Update soon please. I love this story. It's well written and just plain good. o.O I don't really know what to say about it other than that...
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait til u post the next chapter! itachi is the coolest person ever!!! does anyone know the episode number for his first appearance? a friend of myne wants toknow and i cant remember so yea if u know then plz tell me! anyways i hope u post eh next chapter soon!!
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful fiction. A side of Itachi not many see. I look forward to future chapters. I think I noted only a couple of gramatical errors but none the less its perfectly written in my eyes. I eagerly await more! You've earned my fandom. ;D