rate_review Reviews

love. the second chapter was great as well! ^^ I am glad i decided to read this fic.

it's absolutely realistic and it shows a itachi that no one gets to even think about -a human itachi. usually it's either a bastard, a raper or a killing machine, but has never a human side. i like that you're giving him one.

i will keep on follow this fic! thanks for writing it, i enjoy so much. and you don't have to add a lemon every chapter, that would end up ruining the fic.

Ceph

Your story was great!!! I couldn't even tell that english wasn't your first language!

this is by far the best Itachi related fic i've ever read. I've wanted to make a fic about him still being innocent in any form. You just happen to blow me away by this fic. Now i feel i'm not worthy to even try T_T. Just kidding, but seriously, for someone like you, you do a really great job at writing fics. it was dark and smutty while it still kept Itachi's dangerous air about him, making this fic seem like it would have happened as if Kashimono-sama would have written it. My hat's off to you

This was really good; I couldn't tell that you don't originally speak English. I only saw a few typos in the story, but it was mostly just a couple word form confusions. Overall, very well written, and very interesting.

^_^ I can't wait for more of this story.

i must admit... i was a bit uncertain about reading this, because i usually read only naruto!centric fics (itanaru to the love) (itasasu, even if i accept its existence, is hated by me).

but i read it and i must admit it, you _are_ talented. i have never seen such vulnerable itachi described with such IC detail, and i like it. after all, i love itachi.

i think you decided on a really hard story plot, but i enjoy the way you put everything down in your fic, and the style you use for it. i hope you will decide on writing more of this too.

i suggest you to post also on FF.net, to spread this promising fic over the world.

i can't wait to read more of it.

as for itachi paired up with people, will this include

shisui/itachi (always thought it was possible)
orochimaru/itachi (it's obvious)
akatsukileader/itachi (well, it can be)
kisame/itachi (... hell, it is)
itachi/sasuke (though i don't like it, it's possible with how you put it down)
kakashi/itachi (that too, i hate, but we have enough proof it could be)
itachi/naruto (i would die for this pairing! do it! please!)

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it would be pretty interesting to see this fic evolving, especially with the plot you have (i don't mean the lemons, i am speaking about the plot itself). so write more! I will wait for it!

Ceph

I loved it!!!! Please write more for this story... I would love it!!!