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Hey I really like this story....Update soon please, can't wait for the next chapter.

Aww, what an adorable chapter!!! I am really enjoying this fic so far. It's got a very realistic view on how Naruto would cope with Sasuke's defection. I also love the team dynamic. How they are all helping one another, and even the hints of Neji/Shika (such a great couple!!!) I can't wait for the next installment.

The only thing I have to mention is how I don't really think Sakura is portrayed realistically. Don't get me wrong, I can't stand the wench, but it's a shame to see only the one character OOC when I can see the others following a realistic course of actions and their reasons behind it. Sakura's blind devotion, to the point of neurotic fantasizing, seems out of place in an otherwise grounded fic.

I also keep getting spun around more times than I can count with all the training offers. I would imagine, especially in such prominant shinobi families, that training is a personal and intimate thing. Something that should be done only with the most trusted of friends - not so casually passed out as it would seem to be. Otherwise, I adore every aspect of the fic.

Oh, and the whole decoy with the Grass nins, AMAZING. Hehe, had me smiling my own foxy grin and loving Shikamaru all the more. *Glomps Shika* You better treat him right Neji, or else I'll throw Hyuuga-cest at you!!! And not our wonderful Hinata-hime either, Hanabi-gaki would be your suffered mate. *evil laugh*

Ur...moving on. Great fic, keep typin'

Rezzy

I loved that chapter. You're a really good writer and I hope that you continue writing these stories. Too many good authors are quitting these days I don't want to be deprived of your fics too!!!!

love,
the colonel

Wow...great chapter...even though it's been there for a while lol. I can only imagine what Naruto and Lee look like...normal???? haha...that must be quite a sight. Ino's character is really intriguing...I like the idea that she is a bit more mature and has more insight especially regarding Naruto. Don't worry...I don't think the chapter is dull. Everything has its purpose and in introducing Ino and Tenten, I think it was done well. I really am very curious to see Sakura's reaction to the whole situation and well of course Sasuke too, but that's a given. [= I wonder is Team 7 ever going to get back together?? If not...I wonder how Sasuke and Naruto will work out their problems?? I guess I'll just have to wait and see... Nonetheless...I liked the chapter...ooo and Shikamaru's plan to fool the enemies was pretty sweet too [=

I know Naruto’s Taijutsu, Genjutsu and Ninjutsu are lowsy and that Kakashi really did ditch him, but every time I read such things in this fic I get really defensive; I just wanna shout at you that he’s not that bad!
It’s stupid to be like that…
I love reading about others acknowledging just how awesome Naruto is, and it’s so damn sweet to watch him deal with it. I just want to hug your Naruto and pet him a little.
Mah, Ino’s cool too. She’s a very versatile character maybe.
I love all your stories. You are one of my favourite authors, so please keep writing.

Is there going to more to this one? It's really starting to get interesting.

Will there be more to this one?

Omigahh
I love this story.
xDD
"Neji with expressions on his face is scary."
That made me giggle.
Like... really.
I can't wait to read the update.
=D Another story to follow by chapter!
Yosh!
I love how Sakura is still the little teeny-bop she was in the begining of the show/manga.
It gives me a reason to hate her still >D
--Raeann

I really like your take on Ino. Must less annoying. I like that Lee and Naruto are thinking instead of just emoteing. Can't WAIT to see how Sasuke and Sakura react, not only to Naruto leaving but to his growing friendships. Request please, a scene showing Gai talking to Kakashi about his "training". Not sure which would be better a serious Gai or Gai in all his Gai-ness!

i like your story. it is you have an interesting view point about how naruto would act when sasuke returned. i can't wait to see where you go with your story. is itachi going to show up (i love him). i vote that if you want to make this a mpreg story go for it.