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by Cepheus

person Zannie
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool. There was a sentence somewhere in one of the chapters that didn't make sense though. Drained down with him? Shouldn't it be dragged down with him?
Anyways, looking forward to the next one. Not to put pressure on you or anything.
Is the next chapter gonna be about the new team 7 finding out about Ino being their new teamate? I'd kinda like to see Ino pissed off with them. Something along the lines of 'serves you right that he left.'
ha, that'll teach em!
person someone
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I feel really bad for Naruto with the whole Sasuke thing, but you really picked the best team for him. I really do think he needs to talk to Sasuke, even if it's more likely that Sasuke will try to talk to him when he gets out of the hospital. I know you don't like it when people say update soon so... I can't wait to see what happens next! (is that ok???)
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked that Chapter and I think Ino rocks!!! Anyway, I won't say 'update soon' but I will say... update when you can, ne? LOL, this is a really interesting fic.

Ja!
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you're taking the storyline. I've liked this story since the first chapter. You're taking it nice and easy, which helps to build the storyline at a good rate. I look forward to future chapters to see where you'll be taking the plot. Keep up the good work!
person darktoy
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think this chappie was dull. I mean, this kind of stories have to develop slowly so the change is taken more... kindly.

I do love this story, so I'll be waiting for the next chapter crawling up the walls!
person dragonlady sakura
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a dull chapter at all! It was really sweet how everyone (except two certain people) are helping out Naruto. Stiil, I can't wait to read the reaction of Sasuke and Sakura when they learn their team is no more. Great story.
person Damp
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter not needed?? If this chapter was not needed then why'd you put it up?? I'll admit, it was a tad bit boring, but I'm sure this chapter had some sort of roll in the fic. Right??
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Ino has decided to be Naruto's friend. He's need more of them. When will sakura and Sasuke fing out about the next arrangement? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person rachacha
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good story. i can't even begin to describe how good it is. :)



ahhh yes. i can see the beautiful friendship blooming between 'em and officially forming the dynamic...


TEAM BLONDE!!

:D
person Fourthiv
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MMM I cant wait until Sakura and Sasuke find out about Naruto's team change. Ugg, this fic makes me hate Sakura even more!