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YAY! Naruto is making more friends! And is no longer in orange. I like, alot.^_^

Hey, this is a great story that I have been following for some time! I can't wait for you to continue it. Also, I just found your story Poisoned Lullaby... I am looking forward to reading the new chapter next week or whenever you get a chance to put it up. Keep up the great original work!

Update soon, please! The suspense is killing me. Also I can't wait for Sasuke to find out Naruto has left the team and want to see how he tries to win him back. Great story.

Hi there. I just wanted to say that I really really love this fic you have here. I've been following it for a while now, but I only got around now to getting an account here d=. Anyway, I think it's a great story with so much potential. I love reading stories that actually have substance to it and this is definitely one of them. Anyway, I do hope you continue with it...I'm was so excited with the 4th chapter! I can't wait for what's next [=. Great job!!

I like the story, it's definitely not the normal. It makes the story more worth while that you don't rush into things, you're allowing us to get a feel for the characters and their positions in the story. The only problem I have is that the grammar needs a great deal of fine tuning; what you want to say is there, but it's put in an odd order. My mind doesn't seem to be stumped by the arrangement, instead it just passes over it arranging them correctly without much thought or both. Do you have a proof reader? If not perhaps you could invest in one. I know that some writers aren't too keen on proof readers, but a piece of writing being easy to read is important, readers will often abandon a story that's hard to read (I've done it myself), and it would be such a shame with such a wonderful story as this.

I LOVE THIS STORY, PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON! :D

Hurry and finish it! I wanna see Team 7 reaction when they realise they now have Ino instead of Naruto. Maybe Ino should make a comment on how Naruto is growing up, and Sakura isn't, and maybe Ino should save Kakashi explaining it by saying shes there to help Sakura improve. Gotta love Ino, shes so catty, actually no, shes just mean but she cares. Loving it, please continue! And let the fires of youth propell us into glorious destiny! (waggles bushy eyebrows)

eeeeek, if u do m-preg later on it damned well better be sasUKE...other than that i love this story, i never usually review but you're worth it!!! ;P....-glomp-!!!

i like ur fic! realy i do! i hope to read more!

Hmm, very good indeed. I cant wait for more updates

Hey great story!! Can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction when he finds out Naruto isn't on the team anymore.
Keep up the good work!
Update soon!
-Danya