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OMG! ME HAPPY! *squeals*
anyway, yeah, this chapter was needed. specially, since here the begginings of the change have started to show. (And I love to think that Sakura got a reality check... *growls*)
Finally!!! Lee Will not be as green as before!!! and Naruto will get a little more camuflaged!!!
LOVELY!!!!!

Yay! A new chapter!
I loved Lee and Naruto, they were so cute and sweet together.
It seems they would make each other excellent friends!
Poor Sasuke having to be kept cooped up for a whole month with no one but dippy Sakura to come visit him. Boy, is he going to hit the roof when he finds out that Naruto is gone!
Oh, just my own personal opinion, but please say no to m-preg. It never, ever ends well.
Gah! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hey I really like your story. Can't wait for the next chapter

If you made this into a MPreg story it would seem VERY off. So please don't turn this into a MPreg! I like the way this is going. I'm the type of person who loves detail, and loves to make sure the story is going nice and slow. Not super fast. Keep up the good work...and if you don't update soon, you better have a damn good reason for not updating soon.


So it was real, she went to see him every singly fucking day,.... did you mean single or did you mean it like that??

Oh, My!! \*0*/
I think this is one of the BEST fan fictions I ever read! I like the way you write the story and that your not going to fast forward. And even if I like the fact that it’s going to be a sasunaru story, I’m glad that you didn’t make Naruto, that weeping uke that all are so very fond of to right him. He is a strong person, even stronger than Sasuke - and it’s good that you have portrayed him I that way. I’m looking forward to see hoe things develop in the future for all the characters in the story…and I’m really looking forward to the first meeting with Sasuke and Naruto.

And about the Mpreg thing - As much as I like the fact that it would be cute to have a little mini- naru running around in the story I don’t really think you should write it.
MY opinion is that you don’t write it… I don’t really thing that fits in in this story… this have some well… it match the timeline (in some sense) of the Anime/manga - and Mpreg would just ruin, the feeling in it. Again - this is just MY personal opinion… if you decide that you will write it then I bet it will be really good!^^

Again - This is a really good story!
Keep up the good work!^^

Gnargh..no m-preg.. that's not really good for this kind of story.. nuh-uh.. I don't get it why people would like to convert a really good deep story into m-preg-stuff. I think m-preg should be the main-subject in the story..and not a "woah naru's pregnant because kyuubi and naruto love sasuke and the bad-ass demon would give naruto a little piece of happiness in his poor-poor life." yeah.. uh-huh.. really.. erm.. sorry i'm rambling ^.^

Anyway i love your story (and all your other stories..*g*) and it's not the everyday plot-thingie! So there.. Please keep it that way =3

Mmm.. I'm actually quite liking the change in teams, I always did feel that even though Naruto treated his team like his family, the others didn't really. They always seemed a little detached and closed off from each other. Ah, but with this team, it seems like Naruto will be well... can I say 'looked after'? Neji especially seems really caring, and Lee, as usual is just too hilariously cute. And Sakura, is she really necessary at all in any fanfiction =_=''. I loved Sasuke's reaction to her *heart heart*. I'm actually looking forward to hearing more from Sasuke's view ^^.

Anyway, awesome story, chapter. It's all loved ^^.
Update soon!

YAY! An update! Wow, so Sasuke is really feeling the guilt...well i gotta say, he deserves it. He's got a battle ahead of him because the danage he's done is considerable, and when he finds out Naruto left Team 7...Well i'm sticking around for that. Anyway, it was good and once again it's heart warming to know that Neji, Shika, and Lee are prepared to be such good friends to Naruto. He really needs that. About the mpreg business, i don't particularly care, i think if there's good writing behind it it can be passed as believable and could be good. I've seen it done succesfully a few times. If not, there are other stories. Good job. Update soon!

mpreg? dunno, its your shot..
I loved it... it was a great update...hope you keep it sasunaru...nyan... :)

I like how you are slowly building things up. Makes it more realistic and enjoyable that way! I like that Sasuke finally woke up and smelled the proverbial coffee here. Can't wait to see what he has to do to finally win back Naruto's trust.