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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love normality and i think that if you continue it normality will be a great story. Please continue it.
from a fan of your stories,
Miki-Chan
from a fan of your stories,
Miki-Chan
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just when I thought you couldn't get any better, YOU DO!! Dang, this was awesome! Ok, I'm a diehard sasunaru fan, but darn it, he deserves having naruto turn his back on him. hey, is it too late to request nejinaru instead of sasunaru? probably not but thought i'd ask. wouldn't that be perfect? the great sasuke uchiha loses naruto to neji and sakura to lee, with ino there to rub it all in. hehehehehe! anyway, update soon, 'cause the story must go on. luv ya!
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!
I totally fell in love with you story Normality!! It's brilliant!! And I can't wait to see an update!!
Which brings me to the next issue: do you still need a beta reader?? Although I'm not officially registered in the beta reader group, I'd love to help out. As for my qualifications: English is my second language, I studied English at the university and currently work as translator (English - other languages). So if you're interested and don't have a beta yet, let me know!!
Livvy
I totally fell in love with you story Normality!! It's brilliant!! And I can't wait to see an update!!
Which brings me to the next issue: do you still need a beta reader?? Although I'm not officially registered in the beta reader group, I'd love to help out. As for my qualifications: English is my second language, I studied English at the university and currently work as translator (English - other languages). So if you're interested and don't have a beta yet, let me know!!
Livvy
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I really like the way you're developing this! I just found it so please don't be made at me for not reviewing before??!! Write more soon. I especially like you're story with Naruto in Anbu with Itachi. I can't wait for more of that!
Slave
Slave
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and because I forgot to add it in the review, please, please don't make this an mpreg. I can't stand those, except for very few. They are just soooo, odd.
Slave
Slave
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! It's nice to see Naruto get some real friends. I enjoy your characterizations thus far. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Also, if you are still looking for a beta reader, I would be interested in the position. Please feel free to email me.
Keep up the great work!!
Also, if you are still looking for a beta reader, I would be interested in the position. Please feel free to email me.
Keep up the great work!!
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry, my email is gml125@comcast.net
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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I truly adore this story! I've only read Naruto, never watched the Anime, but the characterization is very well balanced and similar to me. As much as I love the fact Naruto isn't the usually going-to-roll-over-and-take-whatever-kernel-of-affection-Sasuke-gives-to-me I really hope he and Sasuke find that sappy happy ending. Please update soon!
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was incredibly well done. A lot of emotions from both sides and it really touched me while reading. I do hope you'll continue with the story. Email me if you need any help or advice. I also have messengers and would be willing to chat to help with any muse issues. Great job!!!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read the majority of your work posted on aff and I have really enjoyed it I am very lazy about reviewing so this is it. I have noticed that you have not updated in some time, are you posting elsewhere?
You asked for c&c but only one thing really stuck out in my mind. You might want to use the word peaceful instead of pacific. Although the meaning is very much the same pacific is kind of awkward and many people associate it with the the pacific ocean.
You asked for c&c but only one thing really stuck out in my mind. You might want to use the word peaceful instead of pacific. Although the meaning is very much the same pacific is kind of awkward and many people associate it with the the pacific ocean.