AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Normality

by Cepheus

person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my! I'm loving this story!:D
i'm just happy tha you didn't turn Naruto do a hyper active idiot. I'm really liking that story so far... And that Naruto DID not go back to Teem seven, he is a strong guy. And I think it was good for him to change teem - now he will grow more than he ever did in teem seven!:D

Your doing an awesome work on this - keep it up!:D

//Gina
person Pastel
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievable chapter. I love it.
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is EXCELLENT.

I love Naruto's new team. You have a good handle on the characters and I can't wait for your next update. ^^
person allthethingsyourefusetosay
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it but i think lee could do so much better than sakura
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to bawl my head off!!!!!! that is so sad that the team broke up( I mean I had known about it from other chapters but now that it happened its so SAD!!!!)..... Can't wait for the next update!!!!! LOve your writing by the way!!!!!!!!
person beautifullove348
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so painful at the end of this chapter! I actually felt the palpable tension...and I could feel the panic Naruto was experiencing. I have to give you major cudos for that! Not many stories can make their readers actually feel the situation as your story made me feel. This story so far is just absolutely amazing! The characters and how they are developing is extremely well written. I love, no adore your writing style. I still can't get over how into this story I was from the first six chapters! Everybody should read it, I swear to God. Wow...now I mean wow...you are talented. This is one of the best stories I have read. I would be your BETA but unfortunately I don't have an account. PLease please update soon! I can't stand to wait another minute :)
person hightojo
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love it it's great, talk about a great plot. If you still need a Beta I would love to give you a hand. My email is hightojo@earthlink.net. So give me a shout.
person Minen
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i usually hate cliffies.. allthough.. the ones in this story rules!!!! *nice guy pose with huge brigh twinkling smile* absolutly love this story..! hopefully sakura will go after lee and he will play hard to catch*evil*^^ btw, pls make sasuke suffer a bit more.. he has had it way too easy on him! does it show that i'm not a great fan of mr. uchiha?
oh, also.. update asap:P can't wait^^ kör hårt!
<3 Minen
person dana
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry for the short review for a really great chapter but i have to go. can't wait til the next update. thanks.
person Sue
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What took u so long? Great chapter! Update soon!