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for Normality

by Cepheus

person dragondancer
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats a really mean place to stop and you so need to write the next ch
person akume
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~grabs Sasuke and Naruto plushie~ Everything going to be alright you two. ~hugs said plushies~ Maa, thanks for the chapter.
person hina88
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating this story!!! an that chapter left an ache in my chest :s it really did - and I elt really angry at Sakura, I'm not a Sakura hater it's just that if she hadn't been selfish and had thought baout her other team mate then she would've known what was going on, it's good that Lee didn't declare himself to her again, he deserves more respect than that. Anyway, thanks for the update!!!

Hina xXxx

p.s. I love Kakashi ^_^
person dima amaya
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ha! i was so happy to see that you updated this. this and so many of your other stories are just wonderfully written. and as to you needing a beta, i might be able to help. i've never really done anything like that but i'm an english major so maybe that helps. anyway, email if you're up for it.
person MellyLa
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you still need that bet I'd be willing to do it for you. Awesome chapter by the way. I've been dying to know how Sasuke and Sakura would react to Naruto leaving team 7.
person puchu
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooo~~!! how could you stop right where it's getting interesting!?!??! such cruelty!!!! anyways, great fic!! I like how it's fairly slow-paced; nothing's rushed. There are quite a few grammatical errors, but nothing a good beta won't fix! ^___^ Which I see you're looking for(I'd love to do it, but with the amount of time I work every week, I honestly don't think I have the energy for it....)

There are sometimes I feel some of the characters are a bit OOC, but this is nicely enough written that I can ignore it, for the sake of the story. So keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to reading the continuation of this.
person Damp
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I´m willing to beta read for you...I haven´t read the fic yet cuz I just wanted to offer that beta read first before someone else could offer ^^.

-Damp *Goes to read the fic*
person Damp
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finished chapie!!

WHOOT!!! It´s about time Naruto and Team Seven interacted!! I thought that encounter would have been just a little more...I don´t know. Sane? More subtle? Less painful? It´s your story, do what you want with it.

Although, I´m kind of worried with Sasuke´s reaction. I have confidence in what your going to do with him and such...but he still worries me because characters have a tendency of writing the story themselves...

-Damp *IT´S TRUE!!!*

P.S. I agree with Sasuke as well...I wished Naruto would have turned around and at least waved good bye at them...I almost started crying when I read that bit...
person Hallie
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Cepheus, man what a freaking good story. This chapter had my heart in my throat, especially at the end. So, team 7 finally knows about Naruto. The interaction was better than I envisioned it to be and my heart is still racing. I love your story and all your others too. Your a great writer, and you have my full respect, there's not many people who can keep me enterained, but you have, and I thank you for that.

Anyway, grat update and I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Bye bye for now.
person Damp
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to give my e-mail...it´s my cuzin´s cuz I´m living with them for a while and I can´t access my other E-mail for some reason...