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This is absolutely awesome, I love it. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I like that you have delved so deeply into the psychology and emotions of all the characters. Keep it up.

Oh wow. Talk about tense moments. I'm almost feeling sorry for Sasuke. He seemed so alone there, almost on the edge of desperation. In fact, I think in the next chapter, he is going to fall into a desperate rut. It will look good on him, I'll admit. Still, the lost little boy inside him sounded like it was about to come out. That, in and of itself, makes me almost feel bad. Almost.

Poor Naruto though. Not realizing in the least what he walked himself in to. I hope that his team can comfort him. Poor, poor Naruto-kun. He is still os crushed. He hasn't really given himself a chance to heal. It may be getting better with time, but he won't fully heal until Sasuke apologizes. Knowing Neji, that chance won't come too soon. Aah, now I can't wait to see desperate Sasuke stalking sad Naruto all over Konoha when he returns from his mission.

Is that why they have such a good mission now? Because Tsunade-sama knew Sasuke was going to be out and about, and wanted Naruto to have a reprieve? If so, YAY! I love Tsunade, and you write her well. Actually, you write everyone well, having most of their mentalities down pat. Thank you for not butchering the characters, and having them grow at a reasonable pace. It bothers me something fierce when cahracters just out of the blue take a total 180. You've got them growing, not changing - bless you for it.

Well, I am definately looking foreward to the next chapter with the reactions of Sasuke and Sakura. I want the Haruno to feel every last drop of torment. She deserves it. Not to mention how angst-filled the Uchiha is going to be. I only hope you make his reactions porportionate to the character growth you're designing. I'd hate for him to turn into a simpering tag-along. He needs to accept his mistakes and earnestly try to regain favour with Naruto-kun. No easily granted forginveness. He's going to have to work to get Naruto back. They'll both be better for it in the end anyway.

I also can't wait to see how Ino-chan goes about beating it into their skulls how royally they messed up. Go Ino-chan!!! I also hope that her lost interest in Sasuke will helo open Sakura's eyes. That girl is pathetic. Help her to become a passable figure in your fic, please. As much as I loathe her, Lee needs some lovin'. If Neji isn't available, then Saukra will have to do. Hehe, I love Shika/Neji. They are so compatable. With the groundwork you've already laid down, I can't wait to see how long for both of them to reach the same conclusions.

Well, that's all the gushing you're going to get out of me now. Keep typin'

Rezzy

I love all your work, so I can understand you wanting a serious beta... but ouch, you really know how to put your former beta down cruelly. I would like to help you out and be serious about it, but I can't offer you perfection. I don't think anyone can.

A mental picture of Neji with that suspicious glint in his eyes, looking at a pile of orange clothes burning right before him while cackling wildly like a mad man was hillarious! Well, that's how I pictured it. hehe.

Can't wait for the next update. And I wonder how Sasuke and Naruto will end up together in the future...

--tsukishiro

this story is soooooo awesome!!!! you should keep on writing it'll make me happy ^_^
the story is really good and the way you made the carecters is perfect for this story.
poor naru-chan he's been through alot but at least he has a chance to be happy for once
keep on with the story

ja ne

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WOW!!!!! This story has SO much potential!!!!!!!!! They way that you have made the characters interact seems perfect. Plus the fact that Naruto left Team 7 and yet is able to find a group that he fits into perfectly is amazing!! I definitly can't wait for morw to come!!!! The way that you have changed the timeline doesn't really seem to show up that much. What I mean by that is that the story seems like this is the way that it should be and it doesn't seem fake at all. All in all the story is wonderful and I think that you are a great writer. O, and I love that you put out nice LONG chapters instead of chapters that take about a minute to read. The story seems much more in depth that way. Can't wait for more!!!! Keep up the good work and good luck!!! Ja ne

I'm sorry it's taken me this long to review. T__T I don't remember if I ever asked you to update soon or not...if I did, then I'm sorry. I understand how you feel, though.

I love Team Neji's (I forgot if they had a team name or not. I suck...but Neji seemed a bit leaderish, so I'm just calling it that for the sake of this review) dynamics. I also love the fact that everyone cares so much to help Naruto out; it's just proof of how he's touched each of their lives so much.

The interaction between Ino and Naruto was a nice touch. I think that if they ever spent time together in the series, then they'd probably get along pretty well (they're similar in some ways), so I think you characterized her quite well. Chouji made me smile in the end too.

This was another excellent chapter. Nice job. ^^

I am loving this so far, very interesting like your Poison Lullaby too. I love the sasunaru and nejishika too!(cUUUUTe) Me too, i think if sakura would get better if she got rid of her obsession with sasuke, and i would at leat learn to tolerate her, but since its not happening*shrugh* To be honest i loathe her, no offence to anyone who likes her tough. But i really hate her, if only she would seriously start acting like a ninja and learn to grow the hell up, and again no offence to anyone who likes her. But everyone knows that sasusaku is fandom, sasunaru is CANON, you know it, i know it, even George Bush knows it, baby! I'm really looking forward to the next chappie to see how sasu-kins reacts to finding out his uke left him( he kinda desrves it, the asshole) I love the way you writte, every time i read a chapie i feel like i'm reading a novel i bought from a really good bookstore. i love how you are including my fave characters, i love lee-chan( are you gonna pair him up with anyone*coughgaaracough*?) and i love how you are plannig the inotenten! I can see that they would compliment each other very well. Is I tachi-niisan gonna pop out too?( i love him) If you are i hope you wont make him rape naru or something( i hate that, i cant see Itachi-sempai doing that!) I know you are the author and it wont change anything, and if you want you can make it happen, but i'm just hoping. I'm plannig to do some fanart on this( as soon as my sensei finishes explaining to me how to use that damn scanner that my boyfriend bought me* kicks scanner* every time i find a fanfic i love i do some fanart on it, and yours KICKS ASS!!! Email me if you want something especific or i'll just draw whatever floats my brain at the time. Thanks so much for such a wonderful fanfic and now i am off to finish the fanart i'm doing for Shirohane so i can start on yours( and to tell all my friends about this fic, of course)


Love, your faithfull reviewer, Tsukiyomi!( dramatic music)


bertinorlando@sbcglobal.net

P.S. Please uptdate soon and i will love you forever!!!!!!! (who would want that? you'll probably think i;m a stalker* Laughs*)

um, sorry about not including this before(forgot* i am moron, please excuse my blondeness even tough i'm a brunet) about the mpreg thing: hey , its your fanfic, you can do whatever the hell YOU want!!! i dont mind and if your reviewers(?) really do support you they wont care and support you till the end. and also wont ask that sasuke or naruto be the uke and have one of them have the babies( personally i have a tendecie of drawing naruto kinda femenine but to me his personallity will always be defiant(?) and proud and very boyish. even tough my fave is always SASUNARU, and i dont really, well cant stomach the tought of sasuke-kins as uke( holds herself from puking and dying), this is YOUR fanfic, YOU can do whatever the hell you want you can make them wear thongs if you want too( EWW!) And even if you make this narusau( pukes and almost dies) I will follow you and will support you till the end! No matter what! Cause thats my ninja way!* gets hit with rotten tomatoe* I also love how naruchans new team is so caring!* i always saw neji as an overprotective big bro* LOve the new team lovin'!!


well i will stop talking you death, i bet your all' God damn doesnt this bitch EVER shuts the hell up, damn where the hells my gun?'* laughs*

Love, Tsukiyomi-chan

I love this can't wait to read more please email me!!