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for The Top Floor

by mirandler43

person Rasengan22
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaah. Traditional whining for update here. Tonight!!! Do it!! You two are so gr8, please keep up the g00d work, upd8 soon!! LOL, did I do that right? oh and this story is so KAWAII!!! i'm such a good fangirl ^_^ but seriously, i'm expecting good, angsty things here with naruto's situation... and as always... i'm curious as to how you're gonna have sasuke react. quite a pivotal chapter probably. no pressure hehe
person innerchild
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just had to review this chapter 'cause of the little naru and neji scene at the bottom. no, u guys aren't horrible ppl for thinking thats funny... at least i thought it was funny. sorry its taken me so long to finally get a chance to read this story. my stupid computer has been... toying with me. it lost my paper for humanities class, froze every time i touched it, and then kept me up all night buzzing at me.

it really does hate me. or it did, until i broke the desk its sitting on. maybe i scared it.

anywho, i love this story so far. now i gotta go finish the next chapters!

-inc
person Colleen
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Very thoughtfully done and well written.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you!
person yuei
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, it's been fun reading this, them in an insane asylm and all, and since you asked for reviews so nicely; its not a problem that you tend to be slow at writing since your writing is so well done, and really you captured them all near perfectly, when you pay close attention it does seem as though they all belong in an insane asylm, even narutos suicidal self seems likely, i mean with as much hate as he gets sure;
person seraphym
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, first I have to squeal like a true yaoi fan because this is my favourite fan fic to date! Love love love it! Definitely the best story I've read in a very long long time. I would really love Shika and Neiji together again, but I can almost see and Shika Lee. Naruto and Sasuke need to get it one ASAP! Amazing character development, I am constantly surprised by the twists of the plot, and the interactions of the characters. Can't wait for the updates!
person kiba1350
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that i have fallen completely in love with your story and i can't wait to read more. I would appreciate it if you would email me when you make an updatee. Thanks
person LemonsLuver
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TREES?!?!?!?!?! Wow that has got to be the most weird explaination of being 'together' I've ever heard of.
Omg Lee and Shika trying to teach Kiba whatNaruto and Sasuke were doing, Priceless!
Kiba was just sooooo CUTE in this chapter >.<
AWWWW MAN only 6 more chapters left no fair. O well I can feel it now that its going to get better ^.^
O poor Naruto and Sasuke, THERE IS ALWAYS HOPE, DON"T GIVE UP YET SASUKE!!Where ever there's a will, there is a way.
OoOo that lime(if it can be called that) was HAWT. Is there going to accutally be a Lemon >.> ??
O is Neji coming too, I hope. OMG I Can't wait for the next chapter
*sits and wait*
person sadistickiss
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was... Ara.. I can't even... You guys're so... I swear I'm your number 1 fan *_* <-- (sparkly eyes)

How do you guys do it? Every chapter is so pack with drama - it's so... no word can bring it justice T_T Ah.. maybe the word 'perfect'? God, that word isn't even enough.

The smut at the beginning was SUPER hot ^^ *shivers* Sasuke jerking off... so hot... Kya~ Naruto is so cute when he's frustrated XD. Um *blush* yeah. Thank you for writing such a delicious scene *bowww*.

I can't believe Sasuke just froze out when he smelt blood though. I was leaning closer and closer to the screen yelling "SASUKE DO SOMETHING!" (my mum got out of bed and told me off ^^''). It seriously scared me to death T_T.

Anyway, that was a damn amazing chapter, you guys are so gifted *_*.

Update soon kudasai! =3
person Fatkat
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
D: Wow, this chapter was great. Kiba's dream was amusing, and Shikamaru waking him up was even more so. The party was awesome. The way Kiba was all apreciating the smaller things in life. I was so happy for him. Rock Lee was so cool in this chapter, I like the way he helped out, I can't say how much I love your Rock Lee. Wow, the scene with Naruto seeing the knife was all "Kiba knocked it down!" before I even read it, dude, I like how you used it for that scene. You really know how to get the tension rising. I was pratically cussing at the monitor. I was all "SASUKE DO SOMETHING YOU IDIOT!" But that might be because I'm retarded. Anyway, the tension, it had me pulled close up the the monitor, praying that Sasuke would notice in time. Thank god he did, I was getting scared for Naruto. I love the way shikamaru comforted Sasuke like that, it was very sweet.

D: I just notice I said Like, love and was all in this review.

Please update, and remember, we're pressuring you to update. PEER PERSURE! D: fall for it this time.
-grin.-
person Akuma Nikushimi
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is an wonderful fanfiction and I love the parings...
its really well thought out but I have to ask
a personal questin...have you ever been to the hospital
because the way you describe it is almost the actul way it is...

I hope Naruto gets better and I can't wait for Niji to come visit...