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for The Top Floor

by mirandler43

person Omnni
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope there will more soon.
person ky0kichi
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't want Sasuke to leave. :(
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i told myself I wasnt going to cry, so i didnt, but it still made me feel depressed. this is a wounderful story. I eagerly await the next chapter. I hope Sasuke uses Obito to get Naruto outa there. I just can see poor Naruto surviving much longer in that place. Anyways. I love the story. I give this a 9 out of 10 stars for some minor details that have been left out after chapter 1
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH I'M CRYING OVER HERE!! When r u going 2 write the next chapter?! U GET ME ALL RILED UP AND U DON'T EVEN HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!??? -_- oh well, keep up the sweet story! LUV IT!!
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
welcome back you two, happy new year to ya. "Hide and Seek" by Imogen Heap - awesome song. i was listening to it before i read this chap. very angsty. cant wait to read the next update.
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god...I'm so depressed now. I want to cry but. I've alread like cried three times for this fic and I refuse to cry some more.........*BAWLS* NOOOOOO SASUKE! NARUTO IM SO SORRY! Wahhhhhhhh! Excellent fic guys! I absolutely love it! You had me hooked from chapter one. UPDATE SOON!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wondered if/when this would be updated again...

Really felt for Sasuke and Naruto here. What they must be going through. Please tell me this is going to end happily for them.

Keep going, please. And more often, if possible. I want to know what happens next.
person roro237
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see this update and read you're going to finish:) This is a wonderful intense story! I really have enjoyed reading. Next chapter will be more emotional?! I'm looking forward to it ^_^
person Allys
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
;_;, Oh god that was so freaking sad *wipes eyes* yeah, you had me tearing up, but I refuse to cry. what are they gonna do?? :(. Agggh, I'm sorry I can't seem to leave a proper review. This just made me so sad. I want the next chapter to come and I don't at the same time. I want to see what happens, but I don't want Sasuke to leave. I really Really want Naruto to be alright, ;_;. Thank you so much for the update guys. I really do love this story.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters were heart breaking. How is Naruto going to handle this? Will Sasuke and he ever be together again? Neji and Shika too?