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for The Top Floor

by mirandler43

person lilly-chan
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! another chapter! *bounces around the room*
Shika, walking in on them... *giggles* I'm pretty sure my face turned red just reading that.^^;
Man, where the hell did they put Neji? It sounds violent O_O *worries about Neji's *cough*sexy*cough* hair*
~Lilly
person sadistickiss
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dopey smile* The end of every chapter of this fic always leaves me feeling really happy ^^ Like I've been swimming in cotton or something else equally strange. I'd just like to thank you for updating, and hug you until you're purple for being the utter most fantastic author(s) ever XP. This chapter was hilarious ^^ Ooh~it was also kinda hot ='x'= Kya, thanks so much for updating, do it again soon =P!
person lone-lycan
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha that's funny. I picked up this story from rasengan's plugs. Anyway I've to love this story. It's just to hilarious to stop reading. But I'm dying to know, where the heck did kiba come up with the name Nar-Nar!?
person EG2
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic, it is sooo cute!!! I know you guys are busy with school/ work, but know that it makes my day to see an update to this fic. Keep up the good work =)
person Nao-chan
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-sob- I wanted Neji to come back~
person Nadezhda
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! A competition! For that I will reveiw this chapter! *does a nice guy pose* 'sides, I have a grudge against ff.net from back when I was like... 12 or something. I totally don't remember what it was for, but you can count on my reveiws to back you up here!

Uh, anyway... Lovely story. Very original plotline! When I first read about this story, I wasn't sure I'd read it or like it, since it was a bit... AU, ya know? Like, more AU than most AU fics. But then I started reading, and all my preconceptions melted away and my appreciation grew along with the characterization of your most wonderfully written Naruto kids. I love this story now! Oh gosh! Can't think of anything more to say! So I'll leave!
person myloveforyou
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was so good. I love this story so much. I feel bad for neji and shika though. Kepp up the good work!!
person Teaspoon
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next! lol I just wanted an excuse to post in here. Go AFF REVIEWERS!!! Anyway, I'm concerned about Sasuke's progress and how long he'll actually stay in the place. I'm also concerned about Shicka adn Neji. Will Neji ever come back? Don't get me rrong I like Lee and want to keep him, but I miss Neji :( ANyway AFF! AFF! AFF!
person Rei
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!
and it was well worth the wait.
person MiniMew
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's me again! You'll never EVER be free of me! *Cough* The humour you promised was definietly (is that spelled right? o.O) there. Never thought I should say this but, LOL! And when Shika got Neji's letter... You gyus make me feel so warm and fuzzy on the inside... I just went 'Awwwwwww'. Great writing as usual, a couple of minor details missing (It was a comma. Yeah, I notice these kind of things. -.-;), but just great. I promise I'll let you know if something seems out of hand. *Nods*. And people's gotta start rewieving some more!!! XD
Now, I've got to get some water, I feel a headache coming (I've been plagued by it for THREE DAYS now!! Feel sorry for me...*sob*).
Till then

~MiniMew, running after water and a headache pill