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~MiniMew, still running for water

Great chapter!) Very funny with Lee giving Kiba the Heimlich maneuver,. even after the fact that what was caught was freed. Yay finally heard from Neji!! Glad to hear that he is doing well. I wonder though what Neji would think of Lee. Do you have any plans on having Neji come back? Looking foward to the next update. Oh ya, good luck with getting the more reviews!P

LOL like hardcore. Ok, first off, competition with ff? Yeah, good luck. This is an "18 and above sight" (yeah, right), and ff is filled with lovely, uh, much younger people. So, you should be proud that we (old, seniles) have reviewed as much as we have! Hehe. *Goes to eat prunes* Ugh, this makes me feel lousy this time you updated so fast? Well-planned plot my ass, it'll be next year before I'm happy w/ the next chapter thanks to our pep talk! Yack, don't wanna think about it, but thank you for the plug.

Ok, story, right. Awww. And you switched perspectives which was different than usual. I liked the opportunity of following Kiba and Shika more closely, but can I just tell you... oh that scene with Sasu and Naru. Ugh, if it was possible, tightening of the pants would have been an issue for me. Gosh, and I'm rarely "turned on" by stories, but I was like yikes, cold shower, party of 1. Ugh, and then Shika interrupted it? Damn him! OMG, but then that Sasuke finished while the other two were out there and he walks out all relaxed. That is SO Sasuke. I did also like the scene at group, as well as the scene before it when they're eating cereal. It was so easy to picture and was very fun. I like how you write them as mature boys, but at the same time, they still act around the 14 or whatever age they are. *Growl* though, too bad Sasuke's off limits cuz the boy is hawt. He always says just the right thing, so I can see how Naruto can't really control himself. They are so super cute together. But I thought Neji's letter was sooo sweet, but not fluffy at all and it broke my heart because I was like, what if that happened to Sasuke and Naruto? But it better not, or I shall kick you like a bad drug habit. *oh squee* It was angst free for the most part, and I am appeased w/ the lovely SasuNaru bits (but ack, I hope Naru didn't have a hard on problem when he gave Kiba a hug). That would be awkward. LOL!

thank you so much for the email about the new chapter, it definitely helped after a long day of school that sucked (and still isn't over... not for another three hours...) i'm glad you liked the review, and i meant everythng i said in it. you are both amazing authors and i loved reading the new chapter. i was, and am continually impressed with the level of work that i see here. it's amazing what you both are able to accomplish with your words. you make me flow along with the characters and expirience what it is they are going through. not many authors are capable of that and i love your stories. you both are amazing and i love this story. i anticipate the next update soon... (hopefully)

now, about the story, i love lee like this. it's highly amusing to see him fluctuating so severely from happy to depressed, and how about that... falling into shika's care. i love that! it's so cute! (huggles lee) but i have to say the interaction between sasuke and naruto was absolutely delicious. i loved their almost journey into citrus fruit (so close... so close) you've done an amazing job with their characters, with the work needed to write and create this story as well as you have. you've impressed me with your story and i love it. and, aww, i'm glad to see shika happy. he deserves a little happiness in the midst of it all, and separation from neji has to be hard. how is that going to affect his relationship with lee (not romantically or anything, but as a friend) i notice his continuing to warm up to lee, but with this letter from neji, will he be friendlier, or will it make him curl into himself as he remembers their time (limited though it may be)?

gah... i love this story. good luck with all of your busy school and work life. i know you'll need it. please, keep writing, take care of yourselves, and update soon!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NEJIIIIIII!!! <33333 I've missed him just as much as Shika. Soooooo are Lee and Shika getting "friendly"...or are they just going to stay friends?? cause that would totally be mean since i love Neji soo much ^^ Once again amazing writing! i love this story. and Sasuke is adorable!!! ooooh and THANK KAMI for those sasuke x naruto scenes the pervert in me is happy!!!

keep writing amazing fanfiction!!!!!

OMG THIS is like the best Mental story I've ever read. Even though I've only read three good ones, this story is at my top. I just couldn't stop reading it. I was up until 3am finishing the last chapter. O o O I wanna be one of the people who knows when you are gonna update the story I'd totally will be waiting XD! I really like the whole stories plot and theme. I'm actually glad you didn't put Gaara into the plot(well he was) becuz as much as I love Gaara, he just doesn't talk, and the fact that he had personality changes, seeing Gaara bouncing around is just creepy. And I LOVE Lee in this story,I just can't get enough of his Youthful energy XD! and kiba is just adorible. Hehehe when I was reading the pervious chapters, Naruto should be Kiba's 'Mom' and Sasuke his 'Dad' (hehehe my little mind is playing with me, thats wut they(sasu and naru acted towards Kiba)) WOW this is the longest review I've ever made on AFF.net. That is a very good sign,the more I review the better I like the Story/chapter. OK enough of my babbling can't wait for the next chapter. XD

nice.

scary but good.

It hits home (if you would like further details, e-mail me). I will continue reading.

Awww. So sweet, like sugar-overdose sweet. XD *luffs you guysh* XD