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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LUV THIS STORY!!! Kiba's hilarious ("HE'S NOT TALKING!") LOL!!!, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, your story is really really REALLY good, I emencely enjoyed the Lee thing, but now he is kinda getting annoying! lol. Anyhoo just wanted to say that I am really impressed with your work and can't wait for more! ^_^
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here I go again! They finally kissed! Aaaw, cute. And Sasuke being molested. *grins*
As before amazing story. You still keep very much on line with the factual. And how Naruto reacted when he thought Sasuke and the others soon were going to leave him, was a usual (as scary as I think it is) reaction, as mental interrupted people often is afraid to be left or have things changed. Very good description. You still have the power to drag me in and see the things happening. I just... Great. It's great. *faints*. I hope to read the next chapter soon enough. And I'm looking forward to that humour you promised *evil grin*.
'Till then!
~MiniMew
As before amazing story. You still keep very much on line with the factual. And how Naruto reacted when he thought Sasuke and the others soon were going to leave him, was a usual (as scary as I think it is) reaction, as mental interrupted people often is afraid to be left or have things changed. Very good description. You still have the power to drag me in and see the things happening. I just... Great. It's great. *faints*. I hope to read the next chapter soon enough. And I'm looking forward to that humour you promised *evil grin*.
'Till then!
~MiniMew
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story soo much you guys are such good writes!! Please E-mail me when you get the next one out I would be so happy!!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weee! I loved this chapter so much! And you had Chouji with his food problem. Hee hee. ^^ Poor Sasuke got molested by Sakura. XD
But yea, I loved all the Naruto and Sasuke. So cute! I was glad you didn't make them do anything XXX'y because if you had I think that would have ruined the current moment. But you didn't, so good for you. ^^ Fluffiness is just enough, and the wait makes the fulfilment more sweet. Anyways, I was so worried when I started to realize along with Naruto that Sasuke is healing. I was mentally yelling 'Sasuke! Fake it! Fake illness!' and all. Of course, I think Sasuke is healing Naruto personally. So they'd be insane to take him away from Naruto.
But anyways, so glad you updated! Can't wait for the next chapter. And yeah! Shino! *glomps him* ^^
But yea, I loved all the Naruto and Sasuke. So cute! I was glad you didn't make them do anything XXX'y because if you had I think that would have ruined the current moment. But you didn't, so good for you. ^^ Fluffiness is just enough, and the wait makes the fulfilment more sweet. Anyways, I was so worried when I started to realize along with Naruto that Sasuke is healing. I was mentally yelling 'Sasuke! Fake it! Fake illness!' and all. Of course, I think Sasuke is healing Naruto personally. So they'd be insane to take him away from Naruto.
But anyways, so glad you updated! Can't wait for the next chapter. And yeah! Shino! *glomps him* ^^
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw... when Naruto was about to lower his head into the water, oh the emotions T-T
I almost *cried* xD
Poor Naruto... I honestly feel sorry for him, but hopefully now that there's some SasuNaruness going on, things will pick up~ ;3
I'd love that email notification on updates, so I can read it as soon as possible ^__^
Cause I really love this story, how you portray the characters, the emotional roller coasters, and the written details~
Please update soon ^_^
I almost *cried* xD
Poor Naruto... I honestly feel sorry for him, but hopefully now that there's some SasuNaruness going on, things will pick up~ ;3
I'd love that email notification on updates, so I can read it as soon as possible ^__^
Cause I really love this story, how you portray the characters, the emotional roller coasters, and the written details~
Please update soon ^_^
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, how cute... they're kissing... I like kissing boys.... *squeals happily before darting off to work again...*
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This must really be one of the best fanfictions I ever read. I really love your writing, and I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yayayay!! new chap, new chap!! *dances in glee* kyaa sooo awesome! all your chapters are awesome, but kyaaaa!!!! poor naru, totally saw that angst/suicide attempt coming! ..didn't expect it to be an attempted toilet-drowning though.. hafta say that was mighty diff lol (soo wrong of me to think it's funny O.o) but yay! for sasuke getting there just in time!! that could also be a thing for him, ne? he couldn't save his fam, but he got there in time for naru... and wooot!! for *finally* some real action (even if it was only kissing, cuz hey ya gotta start somewhere, and it was so sweet! i loved it!! it was perfect for the moments, cautious even with the intensity that led up to it--i hafta add, though, i pretended to myself that naru washed his hands and face first lol *has a germ-phobic ocd*) also i'm glad naruto told shizune on his own, so sasuke didn't hafta be a snitch (even if technically it's the right thing to do, it just doesn't feel quite right when you hafta do something like that *sigh*) and sasuke's freakout over naruto being gone was sad/sweet/touching/heartbreaking, especially when he was all "oh god oh god oh god" and told naruto what freaked him out.. ahhh *happy sigh* i can't wait for the next chap (as usual XP) you guys rock!
~ lg
~ lg
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, half way through I was going to be a spiteful bitch and make a short review! DAMMIT, but then it just kept getting better and better... ugh *looks up at own review just above this one, slaps self for being a paranoid jerkwad* Yes, is all I have to say, yes yes yes to an unstable Naruto. I friggin' love that he's the most messed up one, and I knew he was thinking that he'd be the last to go and that he was the glue and yet everyone would take that for granted! Ugh, I love his attacks the most, because *those* are the ones easiest to feel. Everyone else, it's like you only get the outline, superficial part of their problems, but with him... damn it I love Naruto. Oh God, but I just fell in love with your Sasuke. All those little feelings arising in him for Naruto, and the moment in the bathroom. SHIT. Seriously, I had a squealy fit when he asked if he could do it again... you just never read this sort of innocent, honest, real emotional connection EVER. And please don't let them take it too far too soon, it's moving just right! And as much as I love a nutso Naruto, I am glad he told Shizune *meh unless he was lying* I'm sorry, I know it's Sasuke, but there's no way Naru's just gonna "get better." I'm sure more angst lies ahead after the humor. I personally love the angst the most. *dammit i should have been spiteful* fine, here's your damn long review *pouts*