rate_review Reviews

*dreamy sigh* This chapter was so sweet ^^. I dunno if this'll sound kind of weird or not, but I kinda like the fact you gave Naruto suicidal tendencies, it makes it seem like he really deserves to have somebody heal things (did that make any sense at all -.-''?). Suiciding in the toilet bowl is uber creepy *can't stop thinking about it O_O*. I get where he's coming from though, it'd be so depressing if Sasuke left T_T (pause... I hope you don't squeeze Orochimaru into this).

Anyway, this fic totally rocks. Please update soon ^^.

Great chapter!) Loved the race that they had. It is always god to know what is wrong with someone and now I know what is wrong with Lee. I agree with Sasuke, I too would be scared of Lee. Off to read the next chapter now!P

I'd like to take you up on the alert thing. This story's fantastic, and I'd love to be notified of updates as soon as they happen.

Such a great chapter!) Really enjoyed reading the part with the "HAPPY FESTIVAL DAY" it was really funny!P What a perfect mental proble to give to Sakura, I think it suits her. Haha. Are you going to say what is wrong with the others? Gotta love Kiba, he can be so cute at times. Who would of though that Shika could have put up with Lee. That was sure a intense(sp?) part with Naruto and Sasuke. Glad that things worked out and Naruto went to someone by himself. Yes, please I would loved to be emailed when a new chapter is posted!) Thank you in advance. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Love it!!!!!!
and Finally YAOI!

(gives tissues) don't cry because you don't own them, you've got such control of them in the stories, that i wouldn't know you didn't. you're absolutely amazing with this story. i love the way the story is coming along, i love the dynamics between naruto and sasuke. and oh goodness... their kiss! such a romantic kiss, such a simple kiss, but so damn romantic. i think it has to be one of my favorite kisses ever read and it was so simple. (applauds) amazing job!

and the angst! great job with that. oh i felt so bad for naruto when he made his realization. i just wanted to hug him, you made it so believable and so real. it was absolutely beautifully done. and still, you're continued lyrical writing draws me in and makes me want to read more and more from your hands. please, keep writing and i'll keep reading!

and still, you manage to keep the characters completely in character, believable and wonderfully controlled. that's amazing considering the fact that it is an au. so many people have troubles with that and you have it handled perfectly. thank you so much for the email and i look forward to the next one, especially when you update again.

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

Hey, you're getting as bad as me. How am I to know when to update if I don't get to read yours first? It's like I can't function normally without a chapter from you. *gives worried look* You better just be sick and not slacking off! Here, have some soup... or some... cookies?

*cackles* Oh God! 'My CRANES!' Yes, the story needed a little humour. You have some amazing writing skills. I could just SEE everything happening. And poor Shika. *shakes head* . And ~finally~ Itachi got some of the punishment he deserves.
My mother once worked with children that either had problems at home or had a psycic disease. (it was an institution in the country, where they could come a little away from everything, have fun ect.). I was sometimes with her, and there also was one or two of the boys that had ADHD (I think that's how it's spelled in english), so I know how most act. I was amazed at how well you described the boy's situation here and so on. Not many can do that, and go completely wrong. But you're just... amazing.
I noticed a few minor misspellings, but it was nothing too serious. Please write more soon. (keyword: SOON) *begs on knees*. Please? Until then, see ya.

~MiniMew

Hmmmm. If Neji's going to visit Shikamaru soon.. Hope he don't try to kill that poor-Lee. xDD
Hahaha.. Ooh.. Just update soon. I want more Neji ! I want more kisses between Neji and Shika. -giggle-
Ooohh now I know! When Neji is in Shika's room, Lee (or somebody else.. Tenten maybe..)hears some moans and groans and goes into the room. He (or she)interrupt their passionate kiss, and when he saw it, he just blurts out to everyone that they were kissing! ..Okay.. These are just my own fantacies. UPDATE.

My goodness this fic is really really good! I enjoy how you two write the characters, and I'm really looking forward to the update^^!! (Sasuke and Naruto are soooo adorable *squees*)

oh and I really miss Neji.....cause I love how you wrote the relationship between him and Shika! Do we get to see him soon??? pleeeeeeeeeeease?*pleads with watering chibi eyes*

ah, and i also would like the email when you update, thanks a bunch!