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Hi again! How long are you planning on making this fic, cause it seems like Sasuke would be declared well enough to leave soon(go to another setting instead of super isolation). Anyway different way of protraying Lee, bi-polar, but it works. :) Hope to see more soon!

Oh good goddess!! Noo!! Anything but Lee!!! *snickers* lol Scariest thing ever, and here I thought it wasn't horror. ^_- lol Very amusing. Can't wait for the next chapter. I keep eagerly anticipating chapters. Its so fun to read. ^^

Wow, this is a really cool Fanfic. I've NEVER read anything like it. To be honest, at first, i thought it was going to be rubbish, but when i starting reading it, i couldnt stop, its so so so awesome XD. Please update A.S.A.P!!

wow. i love this story. you both have an amazing control of what you want to happen and what you want the characters to do and it's obvious in teh way you piece this story together, the way you created the characters (in such a different universe but still completely in character for themselves and what their situations are). the prose of this story is lyrical and poetic in its simplicity and continuded complexity. you both have an amazing talent, and to think that it's two of you, piecing this story together. i've read some combined efforts that haven't come out anywhere near as beautifully as this has been done.

now... lee? gods, i haven't laughed so much because of a fanfic in a long time. lee is absolutely hilarious. i love him. not to mention how cute sasuke and naruto are in this story. (hearts them!) keep up the wonderful work you've done with this story and i look forward to more.

please, continue to write and if wouldn't be too much trouble, email me when you've updated this story once more? i would appreciate it greatly.
~hanyou-elf

O.O holy... Rocklee your nutz! But i;m loving Kiba! i must hug him! THE CUTENESS! Y.Y will Neji come back?!

your story is awesome plz continue

I feel...so...emotional now. How could you do this to me? Guzzah. I feel, uh, depressed? Bah, that chapter was so good and so long. Ok, right, the reviewing part. I'm glad Naruto's back, and my heart got all fluttery when Kiba called the sock monkey Nar-Nar. And I like how Naruto got possessive over Kiba, because well, if Naruto's like 14 then he's not this supper Buddha on the mountaintop that he sort of is pretending to be (I mean, hello, he's crazy), so I like that he got mad. He's not perfect. Yes, I know he tries to kill himself, but still, someone's gotta kinda be the alpha male when boys become a pack. (what? i don't know what i'm saying). And finally, Sasuke goes nutso. And I can't say, why didn't he go nutso before because you gave him the trigger of the news story. That scares me that he freaks out when any sort of projectile reminds him of a knife--and it's even more interesting that he sees Itachi attacking Naruto. And the subtle things that you're writing between Sasuke and Naruto... the smiles, the looks, the hugs, whatever, they're very wonderful for building said relationship--Gosh I loved the part where at one point Sasuke was reassuring Naruto that he shouldn't feel bad about Neji and then it flips and Naruto's telling Sasuke not to feel guilty. This is the part that made me feel weird, because my last two years of college I had a similar relationship with a friend, where I was messed up and so was she--and when you get people together with sorta psychological problems they feed off each other. One will sort of get excited when one of them... loses it, because that one can feel better about themselves (secretly), while the other one gets excited from the attention and their own self destructive behavior. And if one is sort of on a downward spiral, the other one might sort of follow--out of guilt or something... I don't know if that's true about all of it, but if you do more research as their relationship progresses... it seems Naruto and Sasuke could sort of save each other or they could both sort of fall even further into their illnesses. Makes for dark stuff. *GAH* That's why I was depressed, but good story, sorry to blather on... and I'll be interested to know what you do with Lee... he'll probably make it lighter, but it looks like he might get on everyone's nerves. I'm curious as to why you chose him... though he poses no threat to interfering with any "relationships." And damn Shizune for being such a psychologist, they're always like, just practice yoga and medicate yourself and you'll be fine. Guh, not that simple. And I'm waiting for Kiba to go nutso on Naruto or Sasuke. ANGST! i need some air. I friggin' love your story so much.

O.O Oh god! RUN AWAY! You brought Lee in?! *faints* What's he going to suffer from? Do I even want to know? Please update soon!

Nyaa! I just started reading this and I almost cried in the first chap!! The scene w/ Kiba trying to take the blame for Naruto so he didn't have to go...so sad! I can't wait to see who all else is in the institute with the boys...this could get interesting nfufufu.

Keep it up! *on to the next chap!*

Houseki

woot finished chap two and still loving it! big thanks to ladygizarme who mentioned your story to me today ^__^ i love the interaction between kiba and naruto, it's too adorable. neji vs sasuke.. not surprising :p now, shika/neji that's an unusual pairing..cute in this story though ^___~

So when do we learn more of Sasuke's past? Soon I hope! mm on to the next chap!

Houseki