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for The Top Floor

by mirandler43

person Damp
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please let this story have a very happy ending. I don't think I could live another day thinking that this fic might take for the worse.

-Damp *dying from the sheer thought of having to wait as long for the next chapter as she has waited for this one.*

P.S.
Don't leave us hanging around for such an awful long time. I don't like waiting THIS LONG for an update.

P.S.S.
Please don't be offended.
person Mike
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great, great story. You and your friend's combined writing style is amazing. The best AU I've ever read and probably ever will. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I really did cry during the Kiba thing and when Sasuke found out he was leaving. As for the music I was listening to it was My Immortal and Anywhere By Evanesence. Gosh I hope he does not have to leave Naruto.
person Eunillul
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I've decided that I absolutely NEED more of this fic. I'm thouroughly enjoying it and you've sucked me into the story in way that I haven't experienced in a long while.
Looking forward to getting the rest!
^_^_^_^_^_^_^
person Gwyllion
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord jesus....OMGOMGOMG!!! This was such a fantastic read that I'm literally incoherent! What a rare treasure! O__O I practically cried and laughed in every chapter in reading Naruto's pain and suffering, not to mention Sasuke's too. I hope HOPE you will keep writing for this fic, cuz this is one of the most unique ones I have ever read. Your characters, especially Naruto, Shika, Neji and KIBA, likable! Kiba...you cute little darling you! I really hope everything will come out ok in the end. Poor Naruto....now that Kiba's gone and next will be Sauske. This fic has me sitting on the edge of my seat! O_O Once again, thank you for sharing this wonderful fic. I love it SO very much. Please do keep up the awesome work! Will wait patiently for more future posts. :D
person Megan
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story but iv been waiting soooooo long for another update

please hurry i need to see what happens !!!!!


pleaaaaaaaaaaaaasee

-begging-
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gaaah you cant stop there!!!! you gotta update!!! i wanna see a happy ending!!! poor sasuke and naruto are gonna be devastated!!! UPDATE ONEGAI!!
person yaoicrackhead
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HURRRRRRRYYY UUUUUUUUUP
iv been waiting for so long for na update!!!!!
this story is just sooo amazing you have to write more!
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this hasn't been updated in a long time. so i'm asking for an update. besides, ending it there was mean as hell. i only just found this, but i can tell it's been around for quite awhile.i hope this motivates you to update because it is an extremely well-written and engaging story. please let us know what happens now and please tell me there will be a happy ending!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEZ UPDATE! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! LOL GREAT STORY! BUT WHAT ABOUT NARUTO? LOL PLEZ PLEZ TRY TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!