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for The Top Floor

by mirandler43

person Psylocke
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah, sorry. Confusing the tags for this site with the ones for Yaoi Gallery.. *shoots self*

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person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is definitely interesting, i'm not a fan of crazy naruto fics, but this has definitely caught my attention. I think it is because you did a good job developing your characters to the point, I don't care as much on the actual plotline, as I do to see the character interactions. The plot line is interesting, but the character interactions are a plus!
person Bum
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic. I hope you update it soon.
I also would li´ke to know what's ''wrong'' whit Shikamaru and Neji.
Mmh. I like SasuNaru, but I like ShikaNeji, too. So more part's where they are together. ^^
person DAUGHTER of an bitch
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is awesome. Please update soon. I just love that Neji and Shikamaru spend so much time together. I can't wait the chapter 3 coming.
A Little Hope: Make Neji to hug Shika. ;)
Yeah.. I really like that that Neji is so aggressive.
Keep going!
person Jackee
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn you, cliffhangers!!! >.<

This fanfic is awesome. I know it sounds f-ed up, but I love Naruto fics set in mental institutions. XD
You've done an amazing job with this, I can't wait to read more!!
person Yaoilady
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!! I can't wait to read more! I really like this story. It's very well done. Good job and keep up the great work! Patiently waiting for ch. 3!!
person Pho
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you meanies! Cliffhangers are so mean. But I'm still liking it. You better hurry and explain after leaving it like that. I think the two of you are doing a good job, so keep it up.
person ladywolfTerri
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good story so far!!!.. but now I am so worried for Naruto!!! *sighs* he tries to take care of everyone...and I want to know why Sasuke is in there!!

I hope another update is coming soon!!
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! Man it's so funny trying to imagine Kiba like that~ >.<
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the first evil cliffie! damn i wonder what the hell neji had in his hand or what naruto did to make him leave the room. the part with kiba and neji was pretty funny. i would've thrown the frisbie at him too. you two are doing great so far. your grammar and spelling is fine and the flow and length of your chapters are great. ^__^ see ya next time.

~Devious