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for The Top Floor

by mirandler43

person Anon
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
stop watching Supernatural and update your dang story, women.

hugs,
raz
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaah. Cliffhanger. I find this fic extremely interesting, and I just want to say that the Sasu/Naru Naru/Sasu thing was excellent in its own way. ^__^ I don't mind surprises in the least, and I found the clumsiness of the two rather endearing. I wait impatiently for an update!
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, chapter 11 ripped my heart out. I was misty-eyed from when Kiba was leaving with the Boyd's up until the end. I look foward to an update.
person Arcueido
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story lots especially how they're so conflicted in their minds..... I can't wait to see what will happen next not to mention how you're going to end this one. Please update soon... Am dying to see the next chapter.... Cheers :)
person takahashi-chan
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg update sooner!!!! its been so long! i need to know what happens next!!! this is by far my favorite fanfiction! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
:)
person tomoyo
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story where do u get ur amazing ideas ...pleaz hurry with the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!^^
person Chantelle
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I PRACTICALLY STARTED CRYING WHEN I FOUND OUT SASUKE WAS LEAVING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person skyryuu
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness. just oh my goodness. damn good. just damn good.
person Carola
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I stopped reading halfwy through this chapter, and then forgot about it for a loooong time.
But woah.... You guys had me crying at the end.
First when Kiba leaves, and then the Sasuke thing... *bawls* But seriously, you're made of WIN! And I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It's worth the wait, really! I give you LOVE! *hugglesquishes*
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I laughed a lot, then I just about cried...this parallels my personal life--friends of mine who I have known for five years and they've become a family (we're a dance company), we have all decided to leave because what each of us wants in life will be taking us different places. So I could empathize.

Goodness, your writing is wonderful.