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that was heartbreaking!! they can't do that!! not so soon, not ever! oh, the pain and betrayal naruto will more than likely feel! and sasuke's pain, too. so sad. and if sasuke leaves, what'll stop naruto from trying to kill himself? with that much pain, he might want to die, and then where will he be? oh the agony!

i love this story sooo much! if you hurry with the next update, i'll see what i can do about delivering jensen ackles naked and hog-tied to your front door... ^.^

Hey guys - just wanted to say you're both doing an awesome job. I've really enjoyed the story so far. The lemon in this chapter was fantastic, I laugh and awwed. Sasuke & Naruto were just so cute and awkward. I think people need to just accept that fiction (hello its in the website name) means that things don't have to be real. And aside from that, people with psychological conditions vary and don't fit into stereotypes (like all people). There are plenty of people out there who suffer from conditions that don't fit into any of the standard psychiatric disorders. I've been learning this is psychology, which I started studying this year. Anyway keep up the awesome writing, I can't wait to see what happens to the boys next.

I love this fic and have come back to reread my favourite chapters many times. I just wanted to say that I'm sorry for all the flames you've been getting. Don't take it too hard because there are people out there who sincerely enjoy your work! And even though I'm terribly impatient for the next chapter I understand how difficult writing can be, especially when you want to do it well. You've never let me down before, so I'll just have to be patient! I await the rest of the story with eager anticipation!

Totally totally amazing. I'd been looking forward to this update for so long. I'm glad that this story is in my bookmarks, and I remember to check it periodically. The lemon was extremely well done, and I can't wait to read your next chapter.

OMG I have been so busy....T__T I haven't checked my mail in a LONG TIME (over a month?)
There really isn't much about this chapter that I DIDN"T LIKE!!!!
I Loved it.... esp. the LEMON *DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I kinda figured thats what those two people where there for XD
Lee is sooooo weird, but I love him...poor Kiba T_T
But he is going to live with a family.....It would be so good for him!
Poor Naru-chan, and his illness...
>O NEXT TIME SASUKE IS SEME!!!!!
>:3
Great chapter guys, can't wait for the next chapter...and take your time on them....goodness not like we're going to die if the next chapter doesn't come out like That!!!

I love your story, chapter 10 was great. The sex was just right loving, awkward, sensual.

aahwaaaah kiba's leavingggg waaaaaah!! ah but this was a great chap, loved how both sasuke and naruto went to shika, the "expert", for help lol; and both had the same idea about 'topping' XD i really love how their first real smut came out, it was a good combination of first time awkwardness while still being really hot--i love that sasuke agreed to 'take it' for the sake of naruto, and the way they ended up having to do it for the safety of naru's leg, omg that was hot too; sasuke impaling himself is always hot >.> waaaah i can't believe it's almost all over, i don't want it to end

Angry... Emails? Over the story? Oh. My. Gawd. I mean, come on people! It's FANFICTION. Read the Disclaimer, 'kay?
Nevermind those kind of people, think positively. -I- adore this story, and I know that there's many others that do. *Stares*. Yeah, it's YOU I'm talking about!
Well, I've got to admit, I don't like SasUKE (aka bottom-Sasuke) in most stories, so at first I was like "Nawww...". But after reading it.. well, let's just say that I'm going to read a lot of other SasUKE stories in the future. *Grins*. And I loved Shika's scheming in this chapther. But...Somebody's going to adopt Kiba. B-but, no! He can't, can he? *Whimpers*.

~Kind-of worried, MiniMew

I couldn't read the lemon 'cause sasUKE part ;______; and i'm really hoping there will be hot naru UKE lemon.... i'm been hanging with this story from the start, don't let me down.... but if we forgetabout that sasUKe part i'd say this story is one os greatiest story that i have read ^___________^

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I'd say you hit the nail on the head with that lemon. ;D But, was it just me, or did the lube go from a "small retangular container" to a "bottle" after Naruto was done stretching Sasuke? (I'm surprised I noticed, quite frankly.)
Anyway, the actual lemon was really good! I was entranced (and I feel weird saying that, but I was) by the things Naruto was doing to Sasuke the whole time -but mainly the hand jobs. XD;;; The positions they took were *tries to think of the right word*...Good? Great? Awsome? Totally freakin' HOT? Yeah, that last one. XD Totally freakin' HOT!!!
Bored Shika is so evil. XD *huggles him for it*
omg. What's going to happen to Kiba! O_O
Another great chapter! (but with a special lemon! XD)
Way to go, ladies!!! =D