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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh I liked.
I also think you did th lemon just fine; like when Sasuke wanted to quit after he got off. Most people forget that the sex is practically over when you have cummed.
Good job. *small smile*
I also think you did th lemon just fine; like when Sasuke wanted to quit after he got off. Most people forget that the sex is practically over when you have cummed.
Good job. *small smile*
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
I take it that Naruto and Sasuke are already in a relationship and Sakura either has no idea, or is just desperate. . . . I like the paragraph beginning with “Naruto simply shrugged as he watched her leave.” The part where it said “he headed for the other direction” seems kind of symbolic.
Oh, great, the dattebayos announce themselves. -_- . . . Yeah, I figured he would hate that. . . . He doesn’t have to be complicated, he just has to be unpredictable.
Oh yeah, that vision is beautiful! . . . Heh, “as long as the idiot didn’t take forever to get to the point.” Oh, Sasuke, that is the point EXACTLY. ^_^ . . . Aw man, he did it with Orochimaru? (*gack*) XP . . . Yeah, I can see Sasuke as a masochist perfectly. Maybe a little sadistic, too. . . . Boy, he’s flexible, too. . . . I dunno, Sasuke, I don’t see the appeal either.
Cute. ^^ Nah, I don’t think it needs a sequel, it’s fine as it is.
I take it that Naruto and Sasuke are already in a relationship and Sakura either has no idea, or is just desperate. . . . I like the paragraph beginning with “Naruto simply shrugged as he watched her leave.” The part where it said “he headed for the other direction” seems kind of symbolic.
Oh, great, the dattebayos announce themselves. -_- . . . Yeah, I figured he would hate that. . . . He doesn’t have to be complicated, he just has to be unpredictable.
Oh yeah, that vision is beautiful! . . . Heh, “as long as the idiot didn’t take forever to get to the point.” Oh, Sasuke, that is the point EXACTLY. ^_^ . . . Aw man, he did it with Orochimaru? (*gack*) XP . . . Yeah, I can see Sasuke as a masochist perfectly. Maybe a little sadistic, too. . . . Boy, he’s flexible, too. . . . I dunno, Sasuke, I don’t see the appeal either.
Cute. ^^ Nah, I don’t think it needs a sequel, it’s fine as it is.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it ^^ Sasuke being tied to the bed yummy >///<
Please make a part 2, yeah? ^_^
Please make a part 2, yeah? ^_^
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sequal,the first time he totally enjoys dry sex with Oro,,can be flash backs as Naruto fists him.Use the contrasts even though they are both intence sensations! Very nice work here.Very.
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa... *shiver* I'm a SasuNaru fanatic, but it's nice to see some nice NaruSasu sometimes ^^. After all, Sasuke is just too *pretty* to be full-time seme XP! Anyway, nice kinky smut! Hehe, love the bondage XD! Thanks for writing it, it was awesome XP. A sequel would be cool, if you're up to it =]. Keep writing~!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*try’s to stop drooling* long aufe to type. Alright i would like to say awesome work very nice the hand cuff thing awesome! the foreplay told genius very well wrote and the ending was just right! awesome job hope to read more of your fan fic’s soon!
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, remind me not to read this at work again.... it's dangerous to my health and my boss is looking very strangely at me when I'm moaning and panting while working.... hmmmm...
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*nods head* yes yes I do believe that you should make a sequel to this. *nods head again* It would make for a very interesting peice to find out how Sasuke gets back at Naruto. *grins thinking of the possiblilties* I can't tell you how fun it is when an author does that. It always makes the story a little more interesting when you know that one of the couple intend to "get back" at their partner. Finding out how that happens has to be the best part.
So in conculsion, you need to make a sequel!!! I shall be waiting impatiently for that to happen and hope that in the end you take me up on my sugestion. After all this was a completely and totally erotic peice and I most deffinatly would love to read another like it really soon.
So in conculsion, you need to make a sequel!!! I shall be waiting impatiently for that to happen and hope that in the end you take me up on my sugestion. After all this was a completely and totally erotic peice and I most deffinatly would love to read another like it really soon.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was indeed a cute story. I personally love Naruto as the seme. It is rather hard to find a story that portrays Naruto as the seme and some what keep his personality intact.