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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Was An Awesome Concept.Can't Wait For More. ^^
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Hinata!!!!
The Truth Shall Prevail - Hopefully,The Shy Bit Wasn't All Lies...She Better Be Letting Us Know What Made Her...So...Not Only Strong...But Cynical. *Shivers*
The Truth Shall Prevail - Hopefully,The Shy Bit Wasn't All Lies...She Better Be Letting Us Know What Made Her...So...Not Only Strong...But Cynical. *Shivers*
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am gonna be honest I find this story unreadable and not just cause of the grammar.
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um that it's much of a pairing fic you should add another chapter where they bring Sasuke back and Hinata and Sasuke confort each other with him asking,why did she try fighting with Itachi and kill Orochimaru and everything.I'm also a fan of SasuHina(Sasuke x Hinata),so I really think you should add more between them.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! Please do continue!! I've been waiting for a fanfic like this!! HInata rocks!! Whoa~ so adorable!! I cant wait to the scene where Hinata have to tell why did she conceal her ability!! Awesome!! Please continue!!
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...really interestin update soon
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey it is getting interesting. hope you update soon.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is story is ok, but with the wierds fonts and such, it makes it hard to read and then the quiality of the story goes down hill. If you fix those, however then this story has the potential to be something great. Keep up the good work, XD
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A little hard to follow, but the concept comes through pretty well. Some work and it will be a great fic. Hinata is the captain and leader of the ANBU? That is really amazing, I love fics casting the usually sweet and shy Hinata as dominating and strong. I am really looking foward to seeing more of this fic. I am quite partial to Kiba/ Hinata pairings, but this pairing is pretty good too. Please continue soon, this sounds like it has good potential. STRONG HINATA ROCKS!