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for Not Old Enough

by looli

person Vague
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person GMHR
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since you've updated this and I hope you haven't abandoned it. Every so often I re-read it and hope that there will soon be another chapter.
person Vague
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

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The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=40. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
person kkk
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH I LOVE THE STORY.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR 1ST KISS.
I HOPE IT'S SOON.
PLS PLS PLS CONTINUE.
person burr
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the last chapter was not a crap! but i wish the story would speed up a bit. naruto's still not showing any interest in sasuke, and it's past 10th chapter already.. the interaction with uchiha's fun club is really amusing :). sasuke seems a bit too ooc for me, since he's always blushing and panicked when near naruto, but i guess it's just your interpretation.

anyway, thank you for this wonderful story :). it's a good reading, though as i said i wish for more narusasu interaction, or at least naruto showing some interest in sasuke already. keep up the good job! :)
person outlander_girl
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, i'm in love with this story! i feel so bad for sasuke though, all that pent up sexual frustration. NARUTO NEEDS TO GET A CLUE AND THEN FUCK THAT BOY SENSELESS.
person Saria
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting to read another chapter of this story, I can´t belive it´s finally out.
I love this, Sasuke is so funny (at least i think that) little Sasuke seems so cute, sakura desesperates me and i don´t understand why Naruto doesn´t care about Sasuke the poor thing I want some kind of action between them!!!!!
Hope u can write soon another chapter pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese I´ll be waiting ;-)
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! How strange, I was just thinking about this fic the other day, and resigning myself to the fact that this story probably wasn't going to be continued. I'm so glad that I was wrong! I thought the chapter was rather interesting. I have to admit though that it feels like the fic has reached a plateau. It seems like Sasuke has absolutely no chance with Naruto, and to be honest, its a lot more interesting when there's still some mystery to the fic. A little interest on Naruto’s part would be nice.

However I really like the idea of Gaara and Ino being a couple. I haven't seen the pair before but I think they make a lot of sense for each other. I do have to say though that I really don't like it that Gaara smokes. I just can't stand the habit. I'd love it if Gaara quite for Ino.

Anyway though, all in all, I really do positively love this fic and I hope you update soon. I don't care whether you like the chapter or not because I thought it was great. I hope you continue this fic.

Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


Dryad1789@hotmail.com
person aria
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YATTA! you update!! i'm very happy~
poor Sakura and Ino...but, Sasuke's heart blongs to Naruto, ne?lol
keep up your great work. please update soon!
person Darling_425
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An updaate! Yippi! I'm so happy! Thank you!
This chapter is great! Made my day!
Love you!