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by looli

person Mimi Hyuuga
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, excellent chapters! I'm so glad to finally know exactly what was bugging Sasuke, I had a feeling it was something like that. And things are only gonna get more interesting in the next chapter I think, considering the current situation. Although, I have to wonder, how are Naruto and Sasuke possibly gonna end up together if Ino is so in love with Sasuke? It seems that Naruto is loyal enough to her not to do anything whatsoever with someone she has such strong feelings for, even if it is just a crush she has on a boy that can't stand her. All things considered, i'm really looking forward to seeing what type of events will lead up to a SasuNaru pairing. This story is moving along at a perfect pace, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job ^_^
person losthimagain
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I take is Sasuke doesn't know that they're brother and sister. Is Sasuke going to find out? I hope you update soon because I likey the ficy very muches!
person Tora
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! chapter 3!! Nice job! update as soon as you can! ^.^
person galeaya
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! even though nothing serious has actually happened yet, I still think your story's going to rock!

keep it up~

oh, and please don't abandon your story! it's one of the few remaining quality stories in affnet. it really has potential~

update soon~
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good........ pretty solid setup. continue please
person losthimagain
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why's Sasuke so mad? Please update soon! I must know what's going through his head!
person dancingkitsune
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a really fun fic so far, I want to read the next chapters uberly bad.. You did really good with the grammar and spelling, too, which is awesome 'cause not alot of people do anymore. hehe So, I'm guessing that Naruto's in his middle 20's, and was in medical school? 'Cause in the summary you said he was a doctor, but he seemed to be close enough in age with Ino and Sakura...xD
person Rei
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Che....need I actually ask you to continue...

fine.

PLEEEEEASE continue.
person LadyApollonia
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dangit! Why is it ending there!?! I need more!
person Kellie
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I get the title now. It was puzzling for a bit, but now ^__^. I wonder about Sasuke & his feelings for Naruto. Like, how did they meet & such. Can't wait for the next chapter ^__^