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for Not Old Enough

by looli

person Savin-me
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God damn it! When Naruto will notice or start making moves on Sasuke! Oh the nerve!
Sasuke stop being shy boy and do something drastic (use your possessiveness, get drunk if that will add courage etc.), throw Sakura away and kiss him finally! Then everything will move on smoothly!

Don’t mind my rant and update soon! XD
person saxis
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! More NaruSasu-ness, please?! :D
Can't wait to read more!
person Just Passing By
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! You stopped! A curse on you!
person Niel
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... ... ... ... This is... WOW!! I LOVE YOU!!!
person Teodora
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is soooooooo cool. i love it! :D it's really nice . i really like it. so can;t wait for the next chapter! :D good luck on your writing ! :D
person Kitsune_19
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really really good story and you have to update. Pwetty pwetty pweese with suger on top. See i dont normally beg but i just cant help it with this story i really really want to read more. PLEASE!!!. Ok i'm going to stop anoying you now and let you get on with the story (Hopefully). Anyway please update soon and bye bye.
person blisblop
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is about Sakura and Ino.Period.Why not just say it.
person Saria
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I´m happy for the new chap, i wanted to see sasuXnaru ;; hope you can update soon.
I never spected to see gaara/ino XD it seems interesting
I totally love your fic :hugs:
person Jade
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG A UPDATE! FINALLY!!! -kisses the screen- DX;;
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the second story that I’ve been lucky enough to come across within the passed week. It’s beautiful and I totally love it. You’re doing such a wonderful job on it. I love Naruto so much in this story. A kid at heart yet serious about life………INCREDIBLE. You have my props, I’m telling’ ya. I started reading sometime this morning before leaving to my Sociology class. I just finished the last two chapter a sec ago. Pure brilliance. And I’m loving with whatever is going on between Gaara and Ino. One of my favorite parts in your story was that part where Sasuke helped out Naruto at the Pharmacy. Dear Kami, and that ass comment that made Sasuke blush was to die for. Leave it to Naruto, I always say. I don’t know your regular patterns when it comes to updating, but I could most guarantee it that I’ll be looking forward to one. So your beta is your sister, Farah? Where are you from? Just curious because the name is Arabic.

Have a nice time with the next chapter. I totally can’t wait for the smut to strike ^-^ *cough* I did not just say that *cough*

Ja ne,
and Salam,

~Ria ^.~