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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO, this chapter was so funny. Please update soon.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! lol I totally love this story, a bit OOC for Sasuke, but I can deal with it ^^ Great job and keep up a good work! Hope you update soon!! ^_^
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was a great chapter! Yay Sasuke was smiling and blushing hahaha! Plez try to update soon!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh,man... such a refreshing change from the norm of regular NaruSasu fic. This had me laughing half the time.
Poor Ino and Sakura.. actaully no, scratch that they deserve exactly what they're getting.
I love the humor in this SO much. Oh and keep Uchiha INcharacter while being true to NaruSasuness major kudos to you there.
I love Naruto's personality, I can so see that happening in my mind.
All-in-all, I love your writing style, the 'causal'ness of it is great, it isn't stiff, but it isn't downright horrid. Though there are some grammer and spelling mistakes, though it's nothing TOO major.
Please update soon, I'm loving this story more and more as I read it~~
Poor Ino and Sakura.. actaully no, scratch that they deserve exactly what they're getting.
I love the humor in this SO much. Oh and keep Uchiha INcharacter while being true to NaruSasuness major kudos to you there.
I love Naruto's personality, I can so see that happening in my mind.
All-in-all, I love your writing style, the 'causal'ness of it is great, it isn't stiff, but it isn't downright horrid. Though there are some grammer and spelling mistakes, though it's nothing TOO major.
Please update soon, I'm loving this story more and more as I read it~~
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh. You get another "please continue" from me, as well.
I'm enjoying the story so far, and my only criticism, constructive or otherwise, would be to clarify the ages of everyone. It's very confusing, since they're supposed to be the same age, and if Ino and Sakura are so much younger, they are acting a bit odd.
Anyways! The story is entertaining, it's been overall amusing, and the writing keeps my attention. Normally, this sort of background would flop in the seas of badfic, but it's staying afloat with quality writing. Good job, and keep going!
I'm enjoying the story so far, and my only criticism, constructive or otherwise, would be to clarify the ages of everyone. It's very confusing, since they're supposed to be the same age, and if Ino and Sakura are so much younger, they are acting a bit odd.
Anyways! The story is entertaining, it's been overall amusing, and the writing keeps my attention. Normally, this sort of background would flop in the seas of badfic, but it's staying afloat with quality writing. Good job, and keep going!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wahoo! third chapter I loved it...hope you update sooner though....although I don't want them to suck..grrr well...do your best ^-^
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ I loves! Itachi makes me laugh! Thank yous! Please update soons!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks interesting so far.
I'd like to see how it goes on. ^w^
I'd like to see how it goes on. ^w^
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY GOD!! I cannot BELIEVE you ended it RIGHT there!! ;-; I'm so sad! Write more soon!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOW DID SASUKE FIND OUT NARUTO'S NAME? PLZ CONTINUE! TOO GOOD TO STOP HERE