AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Not Old Enough

by looli

person kitsuki
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! I've been reading this story over on ff.net, and I am so very glad you decided to post over here, too. I shall wait with baited breath for your updates!
person aria
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!
what does happen at next time...
i can't wait for the next chapter!!please update soon!
person Meow
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. It gets more interesting with every new chapter. Meow wonders how Sasuke got to know Naruto or if Naruto was his brothers friend (or may be not just friend and that's when Sasuke fall for him). So paciently waiting for next chapter. I hope there'd more NaruSasu moments! So Meow loves you, please keep writing!
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dam........that is so wrong...T-T ur so meanT-T T-Twhy did u stop there? why?T-T
person sapphirexkat2
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! early update, and a good one at that. Please continue soon!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter one, and I am goin to on to the 21nd chapter. omg! That is so sad naruto's mom and dad died in a fire,a nd I am also curious to know why he stopped calling his opopted parents mom and dad.. herm.. dunno, but I thought it was awesome! lol, I hope to see you update soon!
person XXDarkness_surroundsmeXX
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAH plz update sooon the suspense is killing me!!! Clever ideas. ooooh sasuke's the jealous type eh....u r my fan fiction hero...wait i have alot of fan fiction hero's. does it count if ur 1? keep up the good work
person dancingkitsune
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kyaaaaaaaaa xD good luck with the next chapter, i hope it comes out as soon as this one did xD
person MaruMaru-Onigedi
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i got a headache from sakura and ino's ...eh..conversations ~_~
I pity sasuke...
person Tali mi
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so funny I can't wait to read more. Ahahahahaahahahhhaa so funny. Your story is genius, not many people think this stuff up, I really really can't wait please update soon.