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for The Idea of Paradise

by Yaoilady

schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this. i hope you continue soon.
person Joyful
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This made me cry. I hope there will be some more soon.
person Aidis
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More More More! Can't wait, will Naruto wake soon? Does Haru-chan even know about her "mother?"
person Exotic Rose83
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story! Poor Naruto! I'm hoping Haruka stays safe and Neji and Naruto can reconnect! Update soon.
person yaoigurl91
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You totally have to update this! It is such a good story with such a rare pair. I hope u update soon!
person fan
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhh i love it i cant wait intill naruto wakes up so neiji and him can make
more babyshehe o0
person Bookworm51485
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So is Naruto still in a coma? Why's he been in a coma for four years? And he didn't get to see his baby grow up. That's sad, you make me sad. And does she know him? I figure they should tell her about her "mother" and maybe also let her visit him. I hope he wakes up soon so he can get to know his child, though losing 4 years of your life after such a traumatic experience to find out you had a baby when you didn't know you could have babies. That's quite a lot to deal with all at once, who knows how Naruto would react to her. Naruto being Naruto, you'd like to assume that he'd love her immediately. But things being as they are and events being as they were, hmmmmm...... The possibilities. I just can't wait for Naruto to wake up and meet his daughter. And maybe for him and Neji to have more kids. I mentioned it in another review, but I've never seen a NejiNaru mpreg ever. It would be cool for your story to be the first. And last but not least, I hope Hanabi rots and nothing happens to Haruka. She needs to just get over herself.
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's so sweet but what about naruto? i just wanna cry thinking about all the high moments of raising a child that he has missed. like first words, steps, tantrums and baby talk. i just hope he wakes up soon for his daughter's sake, neji's and not too mention his own.
person akume
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah! How can Hanabi be so cruel to a child? Well, I thank you for the update. Until next time. Ja.
person angel
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i soooo love the ideal of neji as a father! Please finish it! It rocks!!!