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for The Idea of Paradise

by Yaoilady

person Evermist
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaoi Lady!!! This needs updated, come on! I don't read that much Naruto fanfiction, but this is good, and I want to see Neji being a daddy! Iruka must be horribly overprotective, 'cuz I said so, while Kakashi spoils her! Lee can teach her to fight, and Hinata should make her into a proper lady, and...*ramles on for several hours* so UPDATE!!
person Draconayzia
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is so sad but also kind of beautiful. I hope you continute this.
person randomHime
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Far off' seems like a great name.
person lazykunoichi
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay you so have to continue this story... i mean not only does it look promising but this is a rare pairing and it always thrills me to see more of it. Please pretty please continue this story~!
person lazykunoichi
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay you so have to continue this story... i mean not only does it look promising but this is a rare pairing and it always thrills me to see more of it. Please pretty please continue this story~!
person lazykunoichi
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay you so have to continue this story... i mean not only does it look promising but this is a rare pairing and it always thrills me to see more of it. Please pretty please continue this story~!
person Cloudy
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!

You must update soon as it nice to see some good decent Neji and Naruto Pairings
person vanessa
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the hell? naruto doesn't even have any consent in any of this, but Im sure he'll agree at some point...update soon^^
person chelzi
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! you have to update this! NOW!! i loved it! i want to see more!!! what's gonna happen?!!? when will he wake up? how will he react to parenthood?! to having neji raising his daughter?!! PLEASE!!!~
person leelee
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaa that was sooooo goood write more nooooooooowwwwwwwwwww peeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsssssssssssssss