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I really am enjoying this and find myself looking forward to the next chapters!! I absolute love how you use the japanese terms and the list at the end for the meanings. I just love how beautiful their words are and meanings. I think you did a wounderful job with developing the characters and the details for the story and it's completely caught my interest!!!

Timber

OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, Beautiful Dreamer, Sasuke's Hobby,and In This World of Make Believe do
you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the
email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

This story is so amazing. I'm completely hooked and I can't wait to see what happens!

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Hi, I just read this fic and I love it! The smut is fantastic and I really like your pairings, but I'm also really enjoying the plot - you just have so much going on that I cannot wait to read the next installment whenever you get it out. Wonderful, wonderful fic!

Such an interesting story. And you stopped working on it just as it was getting really good. Are you going to be working on it in the future? I hope so.

good story but i was disappointed when you got to the sex part. real life requires preping and lube for anal sex. otherwise all you feel is pain.

note on earlier review...

its a good story, and there is preping, of a sort but in my mind thats not nearly enough lube.

Words cannot express how much I love your story. I bow down before it's awesomeness. Srsly. I love how Naruto and Sasuke are together in this story, they're so sweet and loving it's amazing. I haven't found your style of emotional and deep writing in a long time, and it's refreshing to be honest. Your characters are well developed and original, your fluff is to-die-for, your sex scenes are screen-meltingly hot, and your drama is well thought out with a complex plot. I love your Naruto. And I love your Sasuke even more. He is so adorable, he screams love-me! it just makes you wanna pick him up and hug him and squeeze him :333 Anyway your Sasuke is just lovely. And their relationship is so sigh-dreamy-perfect. I love this fic right now so so much. Theirloveissoperfect! Aieeee ;o;~! Sankyuu for writing this, hope to read more soon ^^!

this is sooooooooooooooooooooooo wonderful! I´m so in love! One, little and annoying word: ----MORE---- :D well, i like this. ^___^