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i don't recall if i reviewed the first time i ran across this fic, but regardless, i still think it's excellent! you really get into the world of the yakuza, it's so thrilling. and the way you portray sasuke and naruto's relationship is so, so sweet. i love this. update soon, i'm really anxious to find out all the little mysteries of this story!

*twitches eye* ohhhhhh....that ino slapped Gaara....she should die now! and why make Gaara seem so mean? T_T

I take great pleasure reading about how the women delt with obtrusive men in their lives.have revised my opinion of Neji,it has gone up a notch,it takes balls to admit fear.Very refreshing to see these women take contol .Anako and Kakashi are sweet,just sooo cute.They both have good heads on their shoulders and generous souls..The scene between kakuro and sakura made no sence,no,it made sence but i wasn't convinced.The scene was flat..why would sakura do that and kankuro did nothing to provoke that kind of reaction.Even she forgot her training?It felt rushed.But everything else rocked,the Jiraya bit left me rushing through it though I liked Naruto's come back but him yelling it seems OC for this Naruto.All for the plot....

Well... I think that my nose won't stop bleeding for a while, and I'm alerghic to strawberries! LOL, awesome chapter, I hope that Naruto kill the bastard that attached the Tea House!

" Could care less" means it is still bothersome,that one still cares and could(probably should) care less but for some reason gives a s--t/is disracted/ is unfocused.That is why the saying is "Couldn't care less" meaning that it isn't possible to be more indifferent.What is the bizzare trend on this site to misuse this term? I should care less but its driving me nuts.The swimmng pool scene where Naruto is ignoreing the salt water burn to his eyes but he couldn't care less about the pain cause all his attention is on pranking Sasuke.I am rereading this fic and will give proper review at the end.Just had to relieve that spazzam.

another great chapter! oh, i love this story so much! the depth of love that those two are experiencing... *sighs* keep up the excellent work!

The scene with Ino and Sasori was truly suspenceful.It really shone.The make up sex was very touching but brief.Ino says she didn't have the ability bring herself to care .You mean she "couldn't care less"?!heh Heh ,,,,oh.Ok.Just had to compliment you on that truely stellar scene.Ino rocks,its funny a spy would be one of the most truthful,humaine(Kakashi) characters.She is true to herself.Plus she dresses well in my humble opinion,maybe thats cause we have similar wardrobes and attitudes.its not often one finds a woman like her in a fan fic.Some female bashing going on in this fic but,well, if you brainwash a child to be a slave you will have a brain dead adult .I'm assuming most of the women here where brought up to "give their husbands what ever they want",any intellegent woman who is stuck in a society like that would be a few things a huge rebel,a lunatic ,a behind scenes player or outside of society,oh yeah suicidal or legally medicated/illicit drug user(hey prohibition doesn't work,it degrades) most of all they will be shunned and hidden.Not all people in jails are criminals you know,they just don't fit in their society,what ever where ever that is. Itachi has alot more care for Hinata then he has to,I'm surprised.Neji is truely creepy.The Akatsuki are into f'g and eating dead people eh?That's funny but you do have to go low to make Yakuza look noble.Still,its funny.You have Talent,this fic covers alot of bases!!!

omg, what a wonderful story! you must continue, and soon. btw, i would have said this at an earlier chapter, but i had to read through what you had first: ahem,

I LOVE KAKASHI, TOO! (enthusiastically, if you couldn't tell ^_~)

keep up the excellent; i look forward to your next update. (btw, i love AUs; they give a writer so much freedom)

*gulps* Gaara called Naruto... what would he tell him! Ahhh the wait is going to kill me.

yay, an update! hmm, it's obvious that the ero-sannin would prefer women, but i guess i never thought about what he had to say about same sex relations. interesting. and i like hinata, she's got backbone, she merely has to be pushed until she snaps. and neji is quite a pushover if you think about it, which you obviously did. okay, enough of my babbling, keep it up!